Ducks in the Henhouse
A mostly true story71 total reviews
Comment from Samuel Dickens
What an awesome story! (poem) I relate to down to earth tales, and this one is a real winner. Did it ever happen? It seems plausible.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
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What an awesome story! (poem) I relate to down to earth tales, and this one is a real winner. Did it ever happen? It seems plausible.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014
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Thanks for the awesome review! Yes, it's a true story, I just embellished it a little. The hen really did raise the little ducks and freak out when they went in the water. Thanks again for the six.
Comment from acerisestory
What a wonderful story, Cindy! Nature surprises us, I believe. I think we could learn a thing or two from the animals! :) So often, they are willing to care for another creature not of their own species.
Your words move with a very nice rhythm, and your rhyming is impeccable.
This is a fine entry for the contest. Best of luck! Alana
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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What a wonderful story, Cindy! Nature surprises us, I believe. I think we could learn a thing or two from the animals! :) So often, they are willing to care for another creature not of their own species.
Your words move with a very nice rhythm, and your rhyming is impeccable.
This is a fine entry for the contest. Best of luck! Alana
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Animals are amazing, aren't they? I'm so glad you enjoyed my little story poem. Thanks for the wonderful review.
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You are welcome!
Comment from vapros
Well, Henrietta has had a unique domestic adventure, and you have described it with great imagination for those of us who were not there. I had a good time with your good poem. Well done.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Well, Henrietta has had a unique domestic adventure, and you have described it with great imagination for those of us who were not there. I had a good time with your good poem. Well done.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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I'm so glad you had fun with my little poem. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from skye
Nature is interesting, how one chicken will raise ducklings after sitting on the eggs.
You captured the whimsy of the event, the tribulation, fear, and ultimate success inside your well rhymed story poem. Great use of words such as addled, brood, and Henrietta.
Loved it. Excellent.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Nature is interesting, how one chicken will raise ducklings after sitting on the eggs.
You captured the whimsy of the event, the tribulation, fear, and ultimate success inside your well rhymed story poem. Great use of words such as addled, brood, and Henrietta.
Loved it. Excellent.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from tfawcus
How delightfully you tell the tale. The mothering instinct knows no bounds! I'll bet there are a few mums around who have very much the same sort of thoughts when their darling little chicks suddenly turn into teenagers! LOL
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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How delightfully you tell the tale. The mothering instinct knows no bounds! I'll bet there are a few mums around who have very much the same sort of thoughts when their darling little chicks suddenly turn into teenagers! LOL
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Yes, I'm sure all mothers wonder about their offspring at times. Glad you enjoyed my little poem. Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from seaglass
This skillfully rhymed poem tells a wonderful story that has proven true more often than some would suppose. My mother hatched domestic duck eggs under a large hen. She wadded in the pond and scolded as her babies swam.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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This skillfully rhymed poem tells a wonderful story that has proven true more often than some would suppose. My mother hatched domestic duck eggs under a large hen. She wadded in the pond and scolded as her babies swam.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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The real Henrietta wouldn't go in the water. Maybe it was a bit deeper. The babies must have thought she was a very odd duck! Thanks for the wonderful review.
Comment from Dawny53
My hats off to you! This truly belongs in a childrens book and is meant to be shared by the masses! It's a wonderful story full of charm and wit. Very enjoyable!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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My hats off to you! This truly belongs in a childrens book and is meant to be shared by the masses! It's a wonderful story full of charm and wit. Very enjoyable!
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2014
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Thanks! I'm thrilled you enjoyed it so much.
Comment from ravenblack
Wonderful story that can also serve as a parable to let your kids be who they are. Poor hen - I can just imagine her frightened confusion when her little web-footed chicks jumped into the water .
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Wonderful story that can also serve as a parable to let your kids be who they are. Poor hen - I can just imagine her frightened confusion when her little web-footed chicks jumped into the water .
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Yes, I imagine some human parents get a surprise when their kids do something unusual. Thanks for this wonderful review.
Comment from jlsavell
Cindy Warren, I love this poem and I can certainly see it happening. The Earth is filled with amazing creatures with incredible instincts for nurturing. Wonderful imagery and emotional appeal in this exceptional work.. well done... jlsavell
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Cindy Warren, I love this poem and I can certainly see it happening. The Earth is filled with amazing creatures with incredible instincts for nurturing. Wonderful imagery and emotional appeal in this exceptional work.. well done... jlsavell
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Yes, the earth is indeed filled with wonderful creatures. I'm so glad you enjoyed my little poem. Thanks for this wonderful review.
Comment from Zinnia48
I really liked this poetic story! It was clever and nicely packaged in rhythm and rhyme. I enjoyed the visuals and felt like I was reading a picture book to my grandson. Thanks! Caroline
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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I really liked this poetic story! It was clever and nicely packaged in rhythm and rhyme. I enjoyed the visuals and felt like I was reading a picture book to my grandson. Thanks! Caroline
Comment Written 20-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Thanks for the six! I'm thrilled you liked my little story poem so much. Thanks again for the stars and the wonderful review.
