Two little boys.
Twins pulling the wool over their mama's eyes.36 total reviews
Comment from Diny
So you did ryhming couplets and then added a story to boot- good for you
it was cute and a better theme than most coose for this type of contest- Bravo for taking the high road
Good luck
Write on-
Di
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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So you did ryhming couplets and then added a story to boot- good for you
it was cute and a better theme than most coose for this type of contest- Bravo for taking the high road
Good luck
Write on-
Di
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you for another excellent review Di, I always enjoy your comments.
Don't forget to vote.
God Bless!
Comment from Jackarrie
A lovely story in a poem, I can just imaging the things the twins get up to. and yes candy being the motivation. Identical twins can play some tricks even on their Mother. a great photo.
Well written
Mary
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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A lovely story in a poem, I can just imaging the things the twins get up to. and yes candy being the motivation. Identical twins can play some tricks even on their Mother. a great photo.
Well written
Mary
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Yes they can LOL! Thank you for the most excellent review and stars Mary.
Don't forget to vote!
God Bless!
Comment from N.K. Wagner
A funny story about a great plan gone awry (mine used to feed their peas to the dog). No doubt the boys will devise another, soon. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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A funny story about a great plan gone awry (mine used to feed their peas to the dog). No doubt the boys will devise another, soon. :) Nancy
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you Nancy for another excellent review, I always love reading your comments. They tried the dog thing, that's why the poor pooch goes outside at supper time LOL.
Don't forget to vote.
God Bless!
Comment from fayesh
Nice rhymes with s nice narrative. Poor guys should have known better than to fool mom. Your story flowed well. Cute photo of the boys. (Twins, perhaps?)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Nice rhymes with s nice narrative. Poor guys should have known better than to fool mom. Your story flowed well. Cute photo of the boys. (Twins, perhaps?)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Yes twins! Thank you for the awesome review and excellent stars fayesh. It's always great to hear from you. God Bless!
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Comment from Ben Colder
You got my vote. Two twins boy just like them left here an hour ago. My grandsons. What a twosome. Double trouble. Well done. Hope you win.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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You got my vote. Two twins boy just like them left here an hour ago. My grandsons. What a twosome. Double trouble. Well done. Hope you win.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you Ben Colder for another awesome review. Yes they are a great pair and full of trouble 24/7 LOL. They live across the street from me and always want to spend the night.
Don't forget to vote. God Bless!
Comment from ProjectBluebook
Obviously, the temptation is the treats. Mom must had discovered their supper. I can actually see this happen in real life. This poems fits the description of the contest. Filled with humor. Good luck in the contest. Count your doubloon. wackydo
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Obviously, the temptation is the treats. Mom must had discovered their supper. I can actually see this happen in real life. This poems fits the description of the contest. Filled with humor. Good luck in the contest. Count your doubloon. wackydo
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Yes it is! They are a handful on a daily basis. I went back in and added a pic of them with there sister. I always appreciate your excellent stars and reviews. God Bless!
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iT'S AN HONOR.
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Thank you again, don't forget to vote if you liked it! God Bless!
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When I review, your's is highlighted, easy to find. Yep, I know, sometimes you get sixes but no votes? Lol!
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I don't understand why that happens. I have had some poems reach 250 views with over 100 reviews and not get a single vote. I suppose it's like publishing, you have to advertise LOL. God Bless!
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If they would reward members with a member cent pump every six votes? That would give them the initiative to vote. Just lie we get rewarded for reviewing, i believe, we should get a cent pump for our troubles. That would level the playing field and eliminate the rogue votes that come out of the blue without a review? I always pondered this theory? Maybe there should be a catagory for the person who has voted the most and they get some type of reward. I'm sure that it is a money thing like it always is.
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I absolutely agree with you on that one Wackydo, I have been trying to vote on all of the contests myself but find myself in the read department most of the time. Maybe this is something we can bring up to the board! Thank you and I am sure it is always about the money. God Bless!
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I like your handle, 10/4.
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And I like yours, 10/4.
Comment from l.raven
this little story sounds like my granddaughter...she will do anything for candy...very nicely written...and a great message too!!! good luck
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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this little story sounds like my granddaughter...she will do anything for candy...very nicely written...and a great message too!!! good luck
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you I.raven for another great review, Kids are awesome. God Bless!
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yes they are...you are so welcome...xxoo
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Thank you again, don't forget to vote if you liked it! God Bless!
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I will...you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Ya just had to do it didn't ya? I have twins so this one got me from the start. Hiding the food under the couch pillows. Ouch. My girls are 42 and still tell me things they did that I never found out at the time they did it.
Temptation... good job, good luck, :-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Ya just had to do it didn't ya? I have twins so this one got me from the start. Hiding the food under the couch pillows. Ouch. My girls are 42 and still tell me things they did that I never found out at the time they did it.
Temptation... good job, good luck, :-) Carolyn
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you Carolyn for the awesome review and exceptional six star rating. They are a riot on a daily basis, what a blessing. I bet your girls are a hoot, and i can't even imagine all the trouble they get into that is unseen LOL.
Gob Bless!
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Thank you again, don't forget to vote if you liked it! God Bless!
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello mystery poet,
What a delightful story poem. Lighthearted and childlike, it made me smile.
Question: you've used commas in some places and not in others, and no periods at all, or exclamation marks. Any particular reason?
Best wishes for the contest. I think this is a worthy contender.
Perhaps you could indicate in author notes what 'cushings' mean ... cushions, I presume? :)
Have a great Sunday!
Sonali
Listen to me(,) man
Beneath the (cushings- - no apostrophe needed) we will stuff
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Hello mystery poet,
What a delightful story poem. Lighthearted and childlike, it made me smile.
Question: you've used commas in some places and not in others, and no periods at all, or exclamation marks. Any particular reason?
Best wishes for the contest. I think this is a worthy contender.
Perhaps you could indicate in author notes what 'cushings' mean ... cushions, I presume? :)
Have a great Sunday!
Sonali
Listen to me(,) man
Beneath the (cushings- - no apostrophe needed) we will stuff
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Hi Sonali, thank you for the excellent review and stars. For some reason when i edited, i must not have saved LOL. I wrote this shortly before coming to work today in about 10 minutes. It has been properly edited and a pic of the boys with their sister is up. God Bless!
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Thank you again, don't forget to vote if you liked it! God Bless!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing of the poem that yells of the devious behavior the boys came up with. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing of the poem that yells of the devious behavior the boys came up with. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Thank you sweetwoodjax for teh awesome review and excellent stars. God Bless!
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Thank you again, don't forget to vote if you liked it! God Bless!
