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Two little boys.

Twins pulling the wool over their mama's eyes.

36 total reviews 
Comment from heyjude
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Mystery writer, a great job on these poem for
the temptation contest. Candy and anything sweet
is the doom for many of us. I can just see their
supper under the couch cushions. Yuck

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    LOL! Yup, they were a mess that night for sure. Thank you heyjude for the Excellent review.
    Please go and vote it you liked it!
    God Bless!
Comment from Leigh Ann
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Excellent rhyme, meter, flow.
The boys enjoyed the treat though! lol
At least they got to have fun for a minute. This sounds like something little boys would definitely do.
Great story in a poem.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Thank you Leigh Ann for another awesome review and stars. They are quite the little mischief characters.
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    God Bless!
Comment from Charlene0513
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It has been said, you can get away with something for a while but not all the time.
And the boys mischievous ways just caught up with them.
Charlene

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Yes it did Charlene, Thank you for the awesome review and excellent stars.
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    God Bless!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Cute. I can see this happening. I like the fun twist you took with the prompt. The picture is perfect. I am confused by one word. Should the word "set" be "sit" as in "sit on the couch". It still reads fine. It has good flow. I enjoyed the story of these two boys. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Thank you jannypan for the another awesome review and stars. Yes it should be sit, i missed that in editing.
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    God Bless!
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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How cute is this and so like children to think up a way to
overcome rules! Seems they always get caught and things are worse for their mischief. God Bless-em they keep us on our toes. Well done. Nancy

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Thank you Nancy for another amazing review and stars. They are a mischief pair for sure LOL.
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    God Bless!
Comment from gypsycaravan
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I love these clever little boys. My youngest hated veggies and would stuff the mandatory two spoonfuls in her mouth and then say she had to go to go potty. Can you imagine where the peas went? Ha Precious entry in this contest.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    HEHE! In the potty for sure. I love these little guys, they are definitely creative. Thank you gypsy for the awesome review.
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    God Bless!
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Hah! Too bad Korbin and young Gage didn't have a hungry pooch around to help destroy the evidence. That's how I always got away with such antics, heh-heh...

Very clever, and seriously funny, too. You know what they say, boys will be boys!

Best of luck to you in the contest. :}

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Well Dean they do, and they have tried this one before. This is why the poor pooch is put in his kennel at dinner time LOL. I always look forward to your awesome reviews Sir!
    Don't forget to vote please!
    God Bless!
reply by Dean Kuch on 19-Oct-2014
    You are very welcome, my friend. And don't you forget to vote on other ongoing contest either! :}
Comment from RYME4U
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I like the humor and realism in this poem. It is so typical of little boys, The rhyming couplets are smooth and even and it is presented very well. Great job!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Thank you again RYME4U for another awesome review.
    Don't forget to vote!
    God Bless!
Comment from mauial
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Candy is their doom, good ending to the rest of the poem. I think there is a moral to this. When little ones scheme as they did, they plan things that get them caught easily, like stuffing food under the cushions. So discipline hopefully works to stop the behavior.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Thank you Mauial for another excellent review, discipline and the twins go hand in hand daily LOL.
    Don't forget to vote!
    God Bless!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Thank you again, don't forget to vote if you liked it! God Bless!
Comment from flylikeaneagle
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Great poem, clever boys but wiser mother. What a mess, hope they cleaned it up before they were sent to their room. Great story in your poem. Maybe, the boys can do chores for their candy. Have fun in the contest.
flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Thank you for another excellent review flylikeaneagle, chores for the twins turn into a chore for their mother LOL.
    Don't forget to vote,
    God Bless!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
    Thank you again, don't forget to vote if you liked it! God Bless!