Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Brooke, another fantastic poem from your wonderful mind, I really think that there is no subject on God's earth that you could not mke a poem from, Brilliant!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Eric, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by Eric1 on 20-Oct-2014

You are welcome Brooke.

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Exceptional

Truly Brooke there seems no work that you can not do! This is such a delightful read and story. Loved it. xoxo deborah

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Deb, how nice to hear from you. Thank you so much for your kind comments and generous rating :-) Brooke

Comment from robina1978

Exceptional

The artwork is delicious and complements your story-poem very well. A long poem for you. But a nice story about fairies. Rhyme, some alliteration.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Ine, thank you so much, my generous friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Gargantuan2

Excellent

Nice little story, and going from gloom to light is perfect for the season once again. I look forward to every new listing as always :)

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Gargantuan :-) Brooke

Comment from flamingstar

Exceptional

Wow...and wow...what a timely message as we seem to be going to hell in the proverbial handbasket. Fantastic ending and reminder not to let fear win.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

thank you so much, flamingstar - I appreciate your generous sixth star :-) Brooke

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hey, Brooke,

Lots of fairies, a fun and whimsical story. Enjoyed the read.

OMGoodness, where is Sawyer propelling from??
LOL---I can't tell from the pix if he is Macho Man or Super Scared Man!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Jax. He is harnessed and attached to two bungee cords and then jumping as if he is on a trampoline. He was getting 20 feet high - at a college-sponsored Halloween event. Brooke

Comment from Dawn Munro

Exceptional

What a cadence to this wonderful (and epic) story-poem - I can hear it read aloud, and it's almost hypnotic, which suits the subject matter so beautifully! And what imagery! WOW!

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Thank you so very much, Dawn, for your generous and gracious review :-) Brooke

reply by Dawn Munro on 20-Oct-2014

Oh, you are so welcome! What a poem!

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery and descriptive Scheme.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Thanks so very much, Charlie :-) Brooke

reply by c_lucas on 21-Oct-2014

You're welcome, Brooke. Charlie

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem about a strange and wonderful time gone by, but one not without its dangers as well. This is a true fairy tale, with beauty as well as danger.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

Tomes, thank you so much :-) Brooke

reply by Tomes Johnston on 21-Oct-2014

My pleasure

Comment from mikemagine

Exceptional

Triumphant and beautiful! These kinds of poems stir the soul, give us a powerful boost that is always so needed - especially here in the 21st century as things seem to be falling apart!

Thanks!!

Mike

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014

thank you so very much, Mike, for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke

reply by mikemagine on 21-Oct-2014

Sure thing, Brooke:-)