Comment from Wendyanne

Exceptional

Absolutely wonderful Brooke!!! What a delightful poem that children will enjoy with a hopeful message at the end of light triumphing over darkness and fear,

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014

Wendyanne, thank you so very much for your generous and gracious review :-) Brooke

Comment from Drew Delaney

Exceptional

This is such a lovely story in poetry form. I like the idea of changing the darkness of the world into a brighter future. We all have to believe things will get better and this poem suggests that to me. Well written and very inspiring.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014

Thanks so very much, Drew, for your generous and encouraging response to my poem :-) Brooke

Comment from Leigh Ann

Excellent

Wonderful story in a poem. It's kind of magical. The picture does match it excellently also. Your poem would make a wonderful storybook for children, I think. I could see the fairies spreading their dust and causing illumination.
Good job.

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 Comment Written 19-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014

Leigh Ann, thank you so much :-) Brooke