The Fairies of Fernwood Forest
a story poem133 total reviews
Comment from Sasha
What a delightful and fun poem. I love the rhyme and rhythm as I read this. It is definitely a 6, but it is Sunday and I am trying to save a few...sorry. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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What a delightful and fun poem. I love the rhyme and rhythm as I read this. It is definitely a 6, but it is Sunday and I am trying to save a few...sorry. I really enjoyed this. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Valerie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Brooke - this is very well written - perfect in 9/8/9/8 syllables throughout and a good story. Some good use of alliteration, from the title FFF, tangled timbers. Also good simile used in 'cloud as black a raven's wings - good use of both metaphor 'world cloaked in clouds of fear' and personification in ' wondered if light can triumph'. Very well written. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Hi Brooke - this is very well written - perfect in 9/8/9/8 syllables throughout and a good story. Some good use of alliteration, from the title FFF, tangled timbers. Also good simile used in 'cloud as black a raven's wings - good use of both metaphor 'world cloaked in clouds of fear' and personification in ' wondered if light can triumph'. Very well written. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Dorothy, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Glasstruth
Love the title to this. It just rolled off my tongue. You tell an excellent story of a fantasy world where evil vs. good. A most common subject, but bears repeating because that's the kind of world we live in. Great rhyming; and a positive ending gives this its charm and beauty. Les
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Love the title to this. It just rolled off my tongue. You tell an excellent story of a fantasy world where evil vs. good. A most common subject, but bears repeating because that's the kind of world we live in. Great rhyming; and a positive ending gives this its charm and beauty. Les
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Les, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from RYME4U
Excellent. This is such a delightful story. The descriptions here are wonderful and the rhythm of the poem is enchanting.What a joyful tale you tell here.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Excellent. This is such a delightful story. The descriptions here are wonderful and the rhythm of the poem is enchanting.What a joyful tale you tell here.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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RYME4U, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Cajungirl
Hunter, Kaleb, Alivia and Catherine all give this fantastic poem a six. My grandchildren and the rest of the family loved it. As always, thank you so much for making us smile.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Hunter, Kaleb, Alivia and Catherine all give this fantastic poem a six. My grandchildren and the rest of the family loved it. As always, thank you so much for making us smile.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Cajungirl, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) I am so thrilled your grand children give it a thumbs up. That is the nicest thing I've heard all day :-) Brooke
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, well done. Lots of alliteration in the
Faires of Fernwood Forest ....Fernwood Fairies...
and tangled timbers. Good job
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Brooke, well done. Lots of alliteration in the
Faires of Fernwood Forest ....Fernwood Fairies...
and tangled timbers. Good job
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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heyjude, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from kiwijenny
Just gorgeous...just so good I am going to book case it.
This is a splendid poem...of goodness prevailing and light dispelling dark fear
Well done Brooke
God bless
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Just gorgeous...just so good I am going to book case it.
This is a splendid poem...of goodness prevailing and light dispelling dark fear
Well done Brooke
God bless
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Jenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from marijmd
Ah from vultures to faeries - I see today is less spooky and more magical. :) Love the structure here and the story you tell through the piece.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Ah from vultures to faeries - I see today is less spooky and more magical. :) Love the structure here and the story you tell through the piece.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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marijmd, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Darkhorse555
from the picture brooke dressed darkly really love how you painted this flows so very beautifully dear friend excellent piece
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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from the picture brooke dressed darkly really love how you painted this flows so very beautifully dear friend excellent piece
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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darkhorse, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from angelface2
Very lovely artwork for this lovely tale. What a wonderful story this would make for young children. Darkness made light it a very good thing. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Very lovely artwork for this lovely tale. What a wonderful story this would make for young children. Darkness made light it a very good thing. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 19-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2014
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Miss Sally, thank you so much :-) B rooke
