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Light and Sweet contest entry23 total reviews
Comment from royowen
When I started reading, I thought to myself, this fits the contest bill perfectly, great rhyme and rhythm, nigh on perfect pitch and timing, the meaning really was froth and bubble, till it come the end and discovered it was a love poem, perfect and different, well done I loved it! Good luck in the contest, Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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When I started reading, I thought to myself, this fits the contest bill perfectly, great rhyme and rhythm, nigh on perfect pitch and timing, the meaning really was froth and bubble, till it come the end and discovered it was a love poem, perfect and different, well done I loved it! Good luck in the contest, Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Roy, thnks for the generous review.
Comment from adewpearl
solid rhyming couplets
a delightful, delightful poem - love the literal take on light and sweet :-)
clever and entertaining similes
wonderful cadence when read aloud
what a smile-inducing poem with a perfectly romantic closing - your wife must be grinning from ear to ear and giving you a thousand kisses, my friend :-) This deserves a six, but it's Saturday!! I hope you win the contest. Brooke
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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solid rhyming couplets
a delightful, delightful poem - love the literal take on light and sweet :-)
clever and entertaining similes
wonderful cadence when read aloud
what a smile-inducing poem with a perfectly romantic closing - your wife must be grinning from ear to ear and giving you a thousand kisses, my friend :-) This deserves a six, but it's Saturday!! I hope you win the contest. Brooke
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Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Brooke - of course she's having a ell-deserved sleep-in this morning so she hasn't even heard the poem yet! Should be good for a Sunday off for me!
Comment from Domino 2
Yu can't get much 'lighter and sweet' than this.
It's great there's no boring mush in your romance, and it's packed full on inspired fun compliments.
Excellent meter and AABB rhyme which I think usually suits comedy best.
I don't recall giving a sixer for romance in a while, and I have no idea who you are, but here's a thoroughly deserved top rating for bringing lots of 'sweet' smiles to my face this morning. I still have two left on Saturday, so I don't throw them around, and just to friends.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Yu can't get much 'lighter and sweet' than this.
It's great there's no boring mush in your romance, and it's packed full on inspired fun compliments.
Excellent meter and AABB rhyme which I think usually suits comedy best.
I don't recall giving a sixer for romance in a while, and I have no idea who you are, but here's a thoroughly deserved top rating for bringing lots of 'sweet' smiles to my face this morning. I still have two left on Saturday, so I don't throw them around, and just to friends.
Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Ray, thanks so much for the fine review and for parting ith one of the precious sixes.
