Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Very dramatic and effective presentation.

Not just blind patriotism to a country's flag here, but a just social comment that whose who fight for it are often forgotten and/or ignored when they fall on hard times.

Good luck and best wishes, Ray

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the sacrifices made for our flag to fly free. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2014

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements beautifully. You convey a powerful and vivid message in the limited words allotted. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

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Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

This is a great entry into the short poem contest. I really like the sentiments of it. It is so sad to think that they are willing to give their lives and are treated so badly.

Good luck in the contest
mary

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