Haiku (Storm of snow)
Contest entry62 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
You capture my attention by this beautiful photo
The look so cute, to bad they were not playing instead of fighting.
I love the words to your write.
Even though the words were few I got your message loud and clear.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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You capture my attention by this beautiful photo
The look so cute, to bad they were not playing instead of fighting.
I love the words to your write.
Even though the words were few I got your message loud and clear.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you misscookie for the excellent review and stars once more. I always look forward to your feedback. God Bless!
Don't forget to vote!
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You're very welcome. Gave a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
Comment from Acquired Taste
Like this very much - wildly visual and with the photo you've picked - I can almost feel the cold breeze blowing the icy crystals against my cheeks. Good luck in the contest! AT=/
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Like this very much - wildly visual and with the photo you've picked - I can almost feel the cold breeze blowing the icy crystals against my cheeks. Good luck in the contest! AT=/
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you Acquired Taste for another excellent review and stars. We will be feeling those crystals soon it looks like LOL.
Don't forget to vote.
God Bless!
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will do! Jean
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done - just added to your count!
Comment from Supe
This is a well written haiku about a snowstorm. Love the picture you chose to complement your work. Good luck in the contest. A strong contender. Storm of Snow - would love to see polar bears dance!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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This is a well written haiku about a snowstorm. Love the picture you chose to complement your work. Good luck in the contest. A strong contender. Storm of Snow - would love to see polar bears dance!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you Supe for the excellent review and stars. Don't forget to vote.
God Bless!
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I won't and thanks for that reminder. I always feel I did better than the actual vote count. lol
I am going to do it now.
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Thank you, me too!
Comment from teroclan
You did well on the form, however, the poem seems to give a mixed message. The first two lines give an intense message of a storms fury, while the second introduces playful tone with polar bears dancing.
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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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You did well on the form, however, the poem seems to give a mixed message. The first two lines give an intense message of a storms fury, while the second introduces playful tone with polar bears dancing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you for the review and feedback, I was trying to convey that no matter how bad life can get, there is always time to dance. Thank you again for the feedback, this is how I grow. God bless!
Comment from Deniz22
A dance of death? Or love? Or fun? The contrast between the cold snow and the warmth of normal activity of the animals is a triumph of some sort over the elements. Nicely done...
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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A dance of death? Or love? Or fun? The contrast between the cold snow and the warmth of normal activity of the animals is a triumph of some sort over the elements. Nicely done...
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you Deniz22 for the awesome review and excellent stars.
Don't for to vote!
God Bless!
Comment from jaeladarling
Nice poem for this contest! Also a nice, chilly piece for the impending weather. Nice work on this piece. Thanks for sharing, and good luck!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Nice poem for this contest! Also a nice, chilly piece for the impending weather. Nice work on this piece. Thanks for sharing, and good luck!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you for Jaeladarling for the awesome review and excellent stars. God Bless!
Don't forget to vote!
Comment from Emily George
I feel the brilliance of white snow, with the visual painting of your words. This is amplified by your clever choice of that picture, "the polar bears dance."
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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I feel the brilliance of white snow, with the visual painting of your words. This is amplified by your clever choice of that picture, "the polar bears dance."
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you Emily for the awesome review and excellent stars.
Don't for to vote!
God Bless!
Comment from PatVallesMangan
The author of this poem has followed all of the prompts and rules perfectly. It is a beautiful poem paired with an awesome picture! While the storm ravages, the polar bears dance! I love it! Good luck in the contest! Blessings!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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The author of this poem has followed all of the prompts and rules perfectly. It is a beautiful poem paired with an awesome picture! While the storm ravages, the polar bears dance! I love it! Good luck in the contest! Blessings!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you Pat for the awesome review and excellent stars.
Don't for to vote.
God Bless!
Comment from NurseBarb
Beautiful image to compliment such fantastic writing. Your satori line is perfect for this photo. It actually does look like they're dancing. Both trying to lead :)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Beautiful image to compliment such fantastic writing. Your satori line is perfect for this photo. It actually does look like they're dancing. Both trying to lead :)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you NurseBarb for the excellent review and stars. LOL, both of them trying to lead, this brought a huge smile to my face.
The voting has started if you would like to pop over and read the other entries and vote for your favorite.
God Bless!
Comment from Razz
So very cute.
Refreshing to look at.
Imagery is right on.
Photo is wonderful.
Loved this little Haiku.
So well presented.
Good luck in contest.
Razz
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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So very cute.
Refreshing to look at.
Imagery is right on.
Photo is wonderful.
Loved this little Haiku.
So well presented.
Good luck in contest.
Razz
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you Razz for another excellent review and stars. I always look forward to your feedback.
God Bless!
The voting has started if you wish to read the other entries and cast your vote for your favorite.
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You are most welcome, my friend.
I did vote for the best. :)
So refreshing.
Good luck.
God bless and keep you too.
Razz
