Comment from sibhus

Excellent

Ha, ha, what a perfect muse Sawyer is. This was so much fun amd I can really see Sawyer saying this. makes fora perfect Halloween poem that's filled with all things that go bump in the night. Good stuff there, Brooke.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, sibhus :-) Brooke

Comment from Gargantuan2

Excellent

With as many poems as has been inspired in you by Sawyer, I have no doubt that this 'Jack' indeed would have your back. I can't get enough of the holiday poetry, keep 'em coming :)

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you so much, Gargantuan :-) Brooke

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

OH Brooke, that is so sweet...he has Jack to cover his back...I so love this poem...and all the things jack does for Sawyer...a wonderful picture...and a wonderful poem...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Lulube

Exceptional

so cute these pictures are. My how he's grown. does he know he has all these aunts and uncles around the world on fs? lol
Great rhyming, great imagery for this poemly story. Glad Jack has his back.
good luck in the contest\

lulube

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Lulube, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem. His mommy knows, but he's too little to understand :-) Brooke

reply by Lulube on 16-Oct-2014

lol
lulube

Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

The Cute Little One is growing up so quickly, but one constant remains. He is just getting cuter :) This is well written.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you so much, CR :-) Brooke

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

How cute! Both picture and poem. I never thought about it, but those carved faces in pumpkins can look scary especially with a candle inside lighting them up. A fine list of foul fiends that Jack can scare away: bats, vampires, ghosts, ghouls, witches and werewolves. A poem rich with imagery to assure little ones that Jack is a protector.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Spitfire :-) Brooke

Comment from flamingstar

Excellent

Adorable! It's a wonderful feeling to know someone has your back. All the elements of a scary Halloween are present in this poem. Great fun to read as always!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

flamingstar, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from nancyjam

Excellent

Sounds like a good friend to have! Especially
this time of year with all the creepy things
you describe, hanging about.
Great images throughout the poem, terrific
rhyme and meter.
Love the pictures of Sawyer! nancy

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Brooke,

I like the colors of your poem. Oh that Jack is quite a fellow for he is my body guard and to think I carved him all by myself.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Winslow, thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Bina1

Excellent

What a delightful photo, you can see how much he has grown into his own little man! And a very clever poem, about his friend Jack!

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014

Thank you so much, Bina :-)