My Friend's a Jack-O'-Lantern
rhyming quatrains in 7/6/7/6102 total reviews
Comment from boxergirl
Nice job with your 7/6 quatrains about "Jack". The ABCB rhyme scheme makes it flow smoothly and we feel happy to know that Jack has your back. 8-)
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Nice job with your 7/6 quatrains about "Jack". The ABCB rhyme scheme makes it flow smoothly and we feel happy to know that Jack has your back. 8-)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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boxergirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
The photo's are so nice. And then a rhyming poem, not that scary about Jack-O-Lantern. It must still be coming then. Thanks for sharing.
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The photo's are so nice. And then a rhyming poem, not that scary about Jack-O-Lantern. It must still be coming then. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Ine, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a "cute" story about something that gets little respect especially at Halloween. I like the personification greatly. There is a natural flow to the poem. I like how the ending verse sums up poem. I like the many examples you state that your friend Jack will protect you from. Thanks for sharing a fun poem. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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What a "cute" story about something that gets little respect especially at Halloween. I like the personification greatly. There is a natural flow to the poem. I like how the ending verse sums up poem. I like the many examples you state that your friend Jack will protect you from. Thanks for sharing a fun poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
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jannypan, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from daeneam
I've enjoyed this poem so much, Brooke! I hope Jack-O'-Lantern will befriend my kids. They are so fearful of darkness, little noises etc. I suspect, they can see ghosts. I also love to look at the photograph. Sawyer is indeed lovable. God bless him! lovelots, c", Mae
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I've enjoyed this poem so much, Brooke! I hope Jack-O'-Lantern will befriend my kids. They are so fearful of darkness, little noises etc. I suspect, they can see ghosts. I also love to look at the photograph. Sawyer is indeed lovable. God bless him! lovelots, c", Mae
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Mae, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
I spent a while looking at Sawyer pictures and can believe
how time fly... Another Halloween terrific poem , you amaze me.
Great style and imagery ... Pili
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I spent a while looking at Sawyer pictures and can believe
how time fly... Another Halloween terrific poem , you amaze me.
Great style and imagery ... Pili
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Pili :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome. Pili
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: I enjoyed this read and seeing picture of Sawyer growing, with Jack at his back. Rythmic and fun, rhyme to move the story along and an exciting view of a one, two and three year old boy. Nice work. Linda
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Brooke: I enjoyed this read and seeing picture of Sawyer growing, with Jack at his back. Rythmic and fun, rhyme to move the story along and an exciting view of a one, two and three year old boy. Nice work. Linda
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Dear Lord, it's hard to believe he'll be three in another 7 months :-) Brooke
Comment from mfowler
Great friend this Jack.
He fights off, warns off, and keeps off evry manner of dastardly Halloween monster, witch or ghoul. This sounds like a pshychological remedy for fear; a superhero Jack-O-Lantern with a night watchman licence. yes, any kid would want one of those.
Terrifically entertaining verse for kids at this time.
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Great friend this Jack.
He fights off, warns off, and keeps off evry manner of dastardly Halloween monster, witch or ghoul. This sounds like a pshychological remedy for fear; a superhero Jack-O-Lantern with a night watchman licence. yes, any kid would want one of those.
Terrifically entertaining verse for kids at this time.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Mark, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
I remember that feeling of being part of the frightening scene, insulated from harm because of it. A childish cop out but it made the dark night a wonderful, and delightful experience. Your 7/6 is working max. Kenny
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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I remember that feeling of being part of the frightening scene, insulated from harm because of it. A childish cop out but it made the dark night a wonderful, and delightful experience. Your 7/6 is working max. Kenny
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Kenny :-) Brooke
Comment from LovnPeace
I was beginning to think the family grew. How fast it happens. Whenever I need a brake and a smile I read of Sawyer and it never disappoints. Thank you. Blessings. Barbara
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I was beginning to think the family grew. How fast it happens. Whenever I need a brake and a smile I read of Sawyer and it never disappoints. Thank you. Blessings. Barbara
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Thank you so very much, Barbara :-) Brooke
Comment from Eric1
Hi Brooke, your poems of Halloween continue to amaze me, you compose so many, I am really looking forward to the festive season when you start writing your xmas poems, this one, as always is beautifully composed with Sawyer over the years to back up your words how can you go wrong, Brilliant!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Hi Brooke, your poems of Halloween continue to amaze me, you compose so many, I am really looking forward to the festive season when you start writing your xmas poems, this one, as always is beautifully composed with Sawyer over the years to back up your words how can you go wrong, Brilliant!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2014
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Eric, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome Brooke.
