Luck Of The Irish
Contest Entry 5-7-5 Love Poem10 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good alliteration in fame/fortune/for
I love the idea of having one's priorities straight - I may not be famous and may not be rich, but I won the lottery of love ;-) Brooke
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
good alliteration in fame/fortune/for
I love the idea of having one's priorities straight - I may not be famous and may not be rich, but I won the lottery of love ;-) Brooke
Comment Written 17-Oct-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Well, this was one of two beautiful pieces. Normally this would have been my hands down choice. But there was another piece that was just as good. I flipped a coin. Good luck!!!
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Well, this was one of two beautiful pieces. Normally this would have been my hands down choice. But there was another piece that was just as good. I flipped a coin. Good luck!!!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi
Beautifully written and illustrated in your artwork and formatting. Great presentation.
Best of luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
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Hi
Beautifully written and illustrated in your artwork and formatting. Great presentation.
Best of luck in the contest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this short poem about waiting for eternal love instead of flash in the pan. good luck in the contest.
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this is an excellent write, mystery writer, you did a great job writing this short poem about waiting for eternal love instead of flash in the pan. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
Comment from MissMerri
I adore the sentiments expressed in this small poem. The Irish are famous for their romantic hearts, so if this is about you, you have a very fortunate wife. Good luck with this little gem.
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I adore the sentiments expressed in this small poem. The Irish are famous for their romantic hearts, so if this is about you, you have a very fortunate wife. Good luck with this little gem.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely. You do a good job of taking the old adage about the luck of the Irish and turning it into a romantic interlude. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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This meets the contest requirements nicely. You do a good job of taking the old adage about the luck of the Irish and turning it into a romantic interlude. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
That picture is a little blurry on my computer. However, I like the message. That's a better luck to have. No errors to report in this short poem.
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That picture is a little blurry on my computer. However, I like the message. That's a better luck to have. No errors to report in this short poem.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
Comment from mikemagine
This is a very graphic poem. I wonder if Fan Story approves? Kidding! Actually, this is very good! The wording is perfect!
Thanks for sharing!
Mike
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This is a very graphic poem. I wonder if Fan Story approves? Kidding! Actually, this is very good! The wording is perfect!
Thanks for sharing!
Mike
Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
Comment from CR Delport
To find that eternal love, most people do need Irish luck and the way the world is these days, it seems not many people are successful. Good luck in the contest.
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To find that eternal love, most people do need Irish luck and the way the world is these days, it seems not many people are successful. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
Comment from Jackarrie
Weren't you the clever buachaillh You saved your Irish luck for eternal love. I wish you luck in that. and of course I wish you luck in the contest.
Mary
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Weren't you the clever buachaillh You saved your Irish luck for eternal love. I wish you luck in that. and of course I wish you luck in the contest.
Mary
Comment Written 15-Oct-2014
