Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I sometimes feel akin to that last spindly spider. There used to be more counting down poems out there. I like this
one.

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014

LIJ,t hanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

This is exceptionally well written, Brooke. I think it could be kid-friendly for older kids. Not the youngsters.

I like the spindly spider theme.

The rhyming was excellent.
The rhythm flowed nicely and could be recited by teenagers if they wished. I think all children should learn poems by heart.

Well written and an enjoyable read. Boo!!

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014

Thank you, Drew - yes, the older kids love dark :-) Just no poems about stomping and drowning for toddler Sawyer and his crowd yet. LOL Brooke :-)

Comment from granny goes viral

Exceptional

The incy beancy spider went up the water spout. How many times did you play that with you kids? That and I'm a little tea pot? I love this. You rock. I hate spiders.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Granny :-) I appreciate your generous rating. Yep, sang those songs and did the motions with my kids, and sang the songs as a child myself :-) Brooke

reply by granny goes viral on 12-Oct-2014

Have to give you one six a week, or I would have to give you all...most of the time. LOL.