Ten Spindly Spiders
Halloween Counting Poem NOT for little children133 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Like the stomping part. They know about that here on my place. The others get a doze of insect spray. Well done,Brooke.d it much.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Like the stomping part. They know about that here on my place. The others get a doze of insect spray. Well done,Brooke.d it much.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Ben :-) Brooke
Comment from amahra
Oh, I think children could have handled that. I mean, it can't be any worst then 'The itseebitsee spider' LOL. Loved the art work btw.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Oh, I think children could have handled that. I mean, it can't be any worst then 'The itseebitsee spider' LOL. Loved the art work btw.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2014
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Amahra, thank you so much, my funny friend :-) Brooke
Comment from cupa tea
Nasty little spiders it appears. As usual I like your work. It has a nice flow to it and it tells a story. Easy to understand, and I too like the artwork you have with it...Works perfectly!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Nasty little spiders it appears. As usual I like your work. It has a nice flow to it and it tells a story. Easy to understand, and I too like the artwork you have with it...Works perfectly!
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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cupa tea, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Ten Spindly Spiders' is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. I'm so pleased not to be a spindly spider! It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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'Ten Spindly Spiders' is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. I'm so pleased not to be a spindly spider! It was a pleasure to review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Duchess. Yep, being a spider doesn't work out well for these spindly guys. LOL :-)
You're very welcome Brooke. I'm sort of spindly, but haven't woven any webs lately
LOL :-)the Duchess
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is terrific, I really enjoyed it as if I was a child again, Brooke. I love all your counting poems, and this is no exception, wonderful. Giddy
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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This is terrific, I really enjoyed it as if I was a child again, Brooke. I love all your counting poems, and this is no exception, wonderful. Giddy
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Giddy, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Winslow
Dear Brooke,
Ten spiders went on a prowl but only one survived the night. Poor spiders that is for sure but who cares if spiders meet their doom. (LOL)
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Dear Brooke,
Ten spiders went on a prowl but only one survived the night. Poor spiders that is for sure but who cares if spiders meet their doom. (LOL)
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Winslow, thanks so much, my generous friend :-) Brooke
Comment from w.j.debi
I love this. Perhaps it is not for tiny children, but depending on the child, I know some five and six year-olds that would love it. The also love Three Billy Goats Gruff because of the scary troll under th bridge.
Love the picture. Those leaves look like claws against the moon. The spider is set off perfectly.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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I love this. Perhaps it is not for tiny children, but depending on the child, I know some five and six year-olds that would love it. The also love Three Billy Goats Gruff because of the scary troll under th bridge.
Love the picture. Those leaves look like claws against the moon. The spider is set off perfectly.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Debi, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from tbacha58
One spindly spider lived on without his friends --
and that is all there is to tell as this, my sad tale, ends.
Our expert Lady Brooke is back, with an amazing spider poem, so much the rhyming is beautiful, the spiders started to dance. You are trully amazing. Love Terry xoxo
Yet I miss Sawyer. xoxo
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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One spindly spider lived on without his friends --
and that is all there is to tell as this, my sad tale, ends.
Our expert Lady Brooke is back, with an amazing spider poem, so much the rhyming is beautiful, the spiders started to dance. You are trully amazing. Love Terry xoxo
Yet I miss Sawyer. xoxo
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Terry, for your gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
this is a brilliant piece of poetic art! it reminds me of the song: 99 bottles of beer on the wall, 99 bottles of beer. take one down, pass it around, 98 bottles of beer on the wall. and so on.. your poem is however quite eloquent. the 99 beers are not.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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this is a brilliant piece of poetic art! it reminds me of the song: 99 bottles of beer on the wall, 99 bottles of beer. take one down, pass it around, 98 bottles of beer on the wall. and so on.. your poem is however quite eloquent. the 99 beers are not.
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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rebekka, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from madhatter1977
Hi, Brooke, I really like this poem but feel somewhat sorry for the spiders! I put a large one out of the door the other day and hope it's ok! They seem to like my bathtub for some reason! A great poem well suited to a young audience though not too young as you say. Best wishes, Pete :)
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Hi, Brooke, I really like this poem but feel somewhat sorry for the spiders! I put a large one out of the door the other day and hope it's ok! They seem to like my bathtub for some reason! A great poem well suited to a young audience though not too young as you say. Best wishes, Pete :)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014
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Pete, thank you so much for your generous response to this poem. You sound like such a nice guy to take special care to save the spider. I just squash them. LOL Now I am feeling very guilty :-) Brooke
