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The Silent Army.

My first slam poem i ever wrote and its about aborion.

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Comment from Ezra Celestin
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Yes, it is murder. However there is a saying, "what the eyes do not see do not hurt the heart.
It is murder but no one cares; that is for those who commit the legal crime.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2014
    that. is a the perfect saying that sums it all up
Comment from onebrit
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The abortion rate has dropped during the last ten years due to better sex education and birth control. There are people who decry giving teens condoms. But unless you live with your head in the sand you know teens have sex. They are hard wired that way and preaching abstinence never worked. I appreciate your point of view even if I disagree with it. It's obvious you feel deeply about it, as I do too. We are just on different sides of this debate.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2014
    Im not at all against birth control before conception
Comment from GracieAnn
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blackpierce, this 5-7-5 Poetry Contest entry is well written and makes a powerful commentary on what I would also consider murder. It is not PC. I appreciate your boldness. All the best in the contest. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2014
    thanks i appreciate the comment. but whats PC?