A Candle Burns
an octogram for Maureen150 total reviews
Comment from Benjohnsonjr
What a well-written and meaningful poem. I especially enjoyed the fact that you mixed the rhyme around a little. The repetition of the catch phrase really tied it all together well.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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What a well-written and meaningful poem. I especially enjoyed the fact that you mixed the rhyme around a little. The repetition of the catch phrase really tied it all together well.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Benjohnson, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: a sobering poem yet filled with love and hope and a peace which fills the heart. And, I will light a candle for Maureen. Linda
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2014
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Brooke: a sobering poem yet filled with love and hope and a peace which fills the heart. And, I will light a candle for Maureen. Linda
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Ekim777
Every phrase does justice to your profound message. A most moving and inspiring piece. And it reflects the maturity of a lifetime's effort and understanding. It is worthy of the highest rating. -EKim777
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Every phrase does justice to your profound message. A most moving and inspiring piece. And it reflects the maturity of a lifetime's effort and understanding. It is worthy of the highest rating. -EKim777
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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Ekim, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Pili Pubul
A moving tribute to our Maureen , each time I pas by my candle
I feel Maureen , is much emotion and wisdom in your words and author notes. Love the poetic originality. A gem. Pili
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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A moving tribute to our Maureen , each time I pas by my candle
I feel Maureen , is much emotion and wisdom in your words and author notes. Love the poetic originality. A gem. Pili
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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Pili, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are so welcome.... Pili
Comment from Lena Borghi
Brooke,
This has beautiful imagery and so well expresses Maureen's journey and her ever hopeful spirit.
Excellent use of alliteration and beautiful rhymes.
My favorite line:
"for while despair dwells deep in dark,
hope lives within the slightest spark."
Beautiful ending.
Thank you for this hopeful prayer for our friend.
Lena
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2014
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Brooke,
This has beautiful imagery and so well expresses Maureen's journey and her ever hopeful spirit.
Excellent use of alliteration and beautiful rhymes.
My favorite line:
"for while despair dwells deep in dark,
hope lives within the slightest spark."
Beautiful ending.
Thank you for this hopeful prayer for our friend.
Lena
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2014
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Lena, thank you so very much, my generous and gracious friend :-) Brooke
Comment from drivenbackward
I'm not sure of Maureen's status. I hope she's still fighting. A beautiful and heartfelt poem, which was expected. My wife lit a candle the other night.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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I'm not sure of Maureen's status. I hope she's still fighting. A beautiful and heartfelt poem, which was expected. My wife lit a candle the other night.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, drivenbackward. As of the latest update, she is still clinging to life, much to the awe of the doctors. Brooke :-)
Comment from Adri7enne
How lovely! May Maureen follow the light of the many candles burning for her.
I love the octogram, with its unusual meter. Your words are touching, Brooke.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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How lovely! May Maureen follow the light of the many candles burning for her.
I love the octogram, with its unusual meter. Your words are touching, Brooke.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2014
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Adrienne, thank you so much for your thoughtful and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Acquired Taste
Brooke, lovely and heartfelt tribute for Maureen. I am sure she hears your words even now from within your heart. The small flame from a candle does light everything in its path and signals a glimmer of hope we pray for daily. Lovely... Jean
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Brooke, lovely and heartfelt tribute for Maureen. I am sure she hears your words even now from within your heart. The small flame from a candle does light everything in its path and signals a glimmer of hope we pray for daily. Lovely... Jean
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Jean, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from rod007
A candle of hope that penetrates the dark abyss so there can be life and vibrancy whether in this world or the next for the attainment of peace in this uncertain world. We all hope so mush that the candle will burn bright and lead her to peace. Well done, Brooke.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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A candle of hope that penetrates the dark abyss so there can be life and vibrancy whether in this world or the next for the attainment of peace in this uncertain world. We all hope so mush that the candle will burn bright and lead her to peace. Well done, Brooke.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2014
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rod, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Lynar
I enjoyed how the poetic form foreshadows a mind state that speaks about life: "for while despair swells deep in dark, hope lives within the slightest spark.' Nicely was the fist line repeated in last verse. The balance and formula was the message that hope wins, despite dark times in life.
Most enjoyable reminder like in pantoum. No negative comments. Exceptional: A Candle Burns
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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I enjoyed how the poetic form foreshadows a mind state that speaks about life: "for while despair swells deep in dark, hope lives within the slightest spark.' Nicely was the fist line repeated in last verse. The balance and formula was the message that hope wins, despite dark times in life.
Most enjoyable reminder like in pantoum. No negative comments. Exceptional: A Candle Burns
Comment Written 10-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2014
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Lynar, thank you so very much for your thoughtful and generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome.
