Comment from lakeport

Excellent

Beyond the bright blue, indeed that's a wonderful expressed poem,nice flow, good luck at the contest, I enjoyed reading it, God bless you. Hugs!lakeport.

 Comment Written 11-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2014

Thanks for your comments, you are always an encouragement to me. :-) Carolyn

reply by lakeport on 12-Oct-2014

your welcome.Hugs!lakeport

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

nOT SURE , BUT i THINK YOU MADE IT, POET. If not then the wording and photo is worth it all. The falls are beautiful , especially at night under lights. Shalom.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2014

Thank you Ben, for such a wonderful review. :-)

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

This was pretty good with all the words beginning with the letter 'B'. A somewhat difficult task, but you did it and I wish you best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 10-Oct-2014

Thank you for this great review. :-)

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

Bountiful blessings are for all that believe and can have a good heart and enjoy the pleasures of life and their beautiful scenery.
Charlene

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014

Thank you as always for reading. :-)

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

fantastic use of the letter B. Your Alliteration poem is perfect. I found the read to be beautifully written. The picture is so lovely. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014

Thank you for this lovely review. :-)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Very nicely done, author. Your imagery is wonderfully carried throughout your poem; not an easy thing to accomplish in these alliterative laden forms. But you pulled it off marvelously here.

Well done, and good luck!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014

Thank you Dean as always for reading. :-)

reply by Dean Kuch on 08-Oct-2014

No worries.

Cheers! :)

Comment from Veeb

Excellent

Very well done. This is readable and understandable. "Brutally betrayed, body broken" - very moving and description. Lovely poem and a gorgeous photo!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014

Thank you Veeb for this insightful review. I am glad the poem moved you. It was a challenge to write. :-)

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

You meet the contest requirements nicely with this well penned piece. This is a serene depiction of a "B"eatific vision. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014

And thank you for this wonderful review and best wishes, :-)

Comment from onebrit

Excellent

This waterfall is magnificent. It looks like Niagara Falls from the Canadian side....stunning. It matches your amazingly alliteratively written piece which I found strangely uplifting and have gone back and re read it a couple more times.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014

Thank you so much, I am delighted you enjoyed the poem and that you have read it multiple times. :-)

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Exceptional

this is an excellent write, mystery writer, excellent exercise in alliteration with a comprehensible line to follow and the truth of God's sacrifice. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014

Thank you so much for the wonderful words and the shining golden cross award. I appreciate you, :-)