Only a Toy
Being a toy is a lonely life.2 total reviews
Comment from rjpurdy
Excellent! The lonliness is palpable Technically flawless. You say so much in so few words. This poem is a strong contender. Good luck in the voting.
Peace & Grace - rjpurdy
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Excellent! The lonliness is palpable Technically flawless. You say so much in so few words. This poem is a strong contender. Good luck in the voting.
Peace & Grace - rjpurdy
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Thank you
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You meet the contest requirements well with a spot on syllable count and a thought provoking message. This can be interpreted on many different levels related to life which makes it a very worthy entry. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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You meet the contest requirements well with a spot on syllable count and a thought provoking message. This can be interpreted on many different levels related to life which makes it a very worthy entry. I wish you all the best in the judging and thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Thank you
