My first Dog
I miss my dog Zach3 total reviews
Comment from Acquired Taste
very sweet - childlike in its message and in its presentation. I might even suspect you had a dog named Zach - but aren't writers all a bit loose with the truth? Best of luck in the contest. AT=/
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very sweet - childlike in its message and in its presentation. I might even suspect you had a dog named Zach - but aren't writers all a bit loose with the truth? Best of luck in the contest. AT=/
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
Comment from Cajungirl
I think everyone who has ever had a pet can relate to this. Perfect syllable count per line. This is excellent. Best of luck in the contest.
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I think everyone who has ever had a pet can relate to this. Perfect syllable count per line. This is excellent. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
Comment from Selina Stambi
Who can forget their first pet? I remember mine. :)
You've got the correct syllabic count in each line.
A sweet little piece.
Best wishes for the contest, Daniel.
Have a great week!
Sonali
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Who can forget their first pet? I remember mine. :)
You've got the correct syllabic count in each line.
A sweet little piece.
Best wishes for the contest, Daniel.
Have a great week!
Sonali
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
