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Don't Do That

Duck Fun, abcb

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Comment from ProjectBluebook
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Like the mallard drakes. This poem is filled with humor. Ain't no telling what they are saying in duck language. Duck Dynasty has nothin' on them. Dissing everyone is comical. Very cute... count your ducklings. wackydo

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
    My ducklings are all in a row, just can't find the row. lol

    thxs for your great review Rickey

    lulube
reply by ProjectBluebook on 06-Oct-2014
    You are hilarious, Lulube. Quack! quack! wack is back.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
    that's why you are
    Do-wack-a-do

    lulube
reply by ProjectBluebook on 07-Oct-2014
    You put it nicely. wacky is do loco in Spanish
Comment from TAB_that's me
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thanks for this great message my friend. I have been dissing someone lately and I need to stop - right now. great poem;)
teresa

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
    Now who would think that a duck fun styled poem would have an influence on a reader. Thxs for that. I tried to put more into this than just humor.

    lulube
Comment from sibhus
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Ha, ha, some good advice for man or fowl. This is a fun little piece that really goes well with the picture and definitely some good advice for the love lon as well. The rhymes really work well together and some funny stuff.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
    thxs for this great review and so glad that you enjoyed this Duck Fun poem

    lulube
Comment from Genya
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What a cutie this is. Just a picture of two ducks yet you can transform it into a great little poem. Pull your head up so you can hear me... just great. Here's this duck laying down the law and the other one, just trying to paddle his troubles away. Very cleverly done. Loved this. Don't think I will be able to look at another duck and think he is trying to drown his sorrows. Genya

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
    lol now that you'll be thinking of drowning ducks, lol, keep reading I can't wait to see what you will be thinking about them next.
    thxs for your review

    lulube
Comment from Neonewman
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wonderful piece, well-crafted and to the point. This is an easy five stars from and the picture of the ducks takes me home to the farm and fishing. God Bless!

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 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
    I live in a farming and fishing town outside of Vancouver BC, only 10 minutes over the river and I'm in city madness, I'll stay on this side of the river.
    thxs for your review

    lulube