Don't Do That
Duck Fun, abcb15 total reviews
Comment from Rosalyne
Hi, Lulube.
What a fun poem that is a perfect fit with the photograph. Both are so well done, and really ring with humour. This is great, especially the use of the word, "dissing," a perfect word for your poem.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Hi, Lulube.
What a fun poem that is a perfect fit with the photograph. Both are so well done, and really ring with humour. This is great, especially the use of the word, "dissing," a perfect word for your poem.
Bye
Rosalyne :)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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thxs rosalyne, glad you enjoyed this one. and thxs again for your support in your reviews
lulube
Comment from Selina Stambi
Duck Fun ... hooray! You're on a roll, Lori.
Dissing .... I love your brave use of this word my kids love.
Keep 'ducking', my friend.
Hugs and love,
xxx
Sonali
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Duck Fun ... hooray! You're on a roll, Lori.
Dissing .... I love your brave use of this word my kids love.
Keep 'ducking', my friend.
Hugs and love,
xxx
Sonali
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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I love dissing, the word, as well. It says so much. Amazing what a little walk taking pictures can stir up.
thxs for your review Sonali
lulube
Comment from boxergirl
Ha! I really enjoyed this duck fun poem with abcb rhyme scheme. I can just hear the voice of one duck talking to the one with its head underwater. 8-)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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Ha! I really enjoyed this duck fun poem with abcb rhyme scheme. I can just hear the voice of one duck talking to the one with its head underwater. 8-)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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so glad you enjoyed this one. Your response is greatly appreciated.
thxs for your review
lulube
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Lulube...
This is a fun read.
Many times as a mother, I said those exact words, "Don't do that!" Also, "Pull your head out of the water!"
Jeez -- did you read my mind while writing this one? LOL.
Love the poem, and the pix.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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Hi, Lulube...
This is a fun read.
Many times as a mother, I said those exact words, "Don't do that!" Also, "Pull your head out of the water!"
Jeez -- did you read my mind while writing this one? LOL.
Love the poem, and the pix.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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lol I think certain phrases are just imbedded into mothers. It's when you can hear your mom's voice coming out of your mouth that is scary. lol
thxs for the review
lulube
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LOL!!! I hear you. Tom will tell me that I sound just like my mom sometimes. Her favorite expression was, "I don't give a damn!" You have to think of this expression as Maxine from the the greeting cards fame would say it, and then you have my mom! (*.*) I have been known to, "Not give a damn, as well!"
Cheers...Jax
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lol got her. lol I learnt how to swear really good in the tough bars I worked in but since 1999 my last year at that, I found== it extremely hard to overcome so I came up with my own swearing substitute that goes with any tone of voice, any situation needed to be expressed, and has that same effect on yourself as you say it as swearing seems to do.
OH-CHEE-WAH try it sometime
I can't wait to hear it from someplace else, knowing it did expand from here. Only a handful of people that know me say it now
lulube
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LOL!!
I love it. I just may steal your line, my friend.
Cheers...Jax
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steal away lol
lulube
Comment from Joan E.
Your notes and title caught my attention. I enjoyed your "duck fun"! The picture you selected established the mood well. I relished your lighthearted chiding and your rhymes. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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Your notes and title caught my attention. I enjoyed your "duck fun"! The picture you selected established the mood well. I relished your lighthearted chiding and your rhymes. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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thxs for that! and for the new word for me; chiding, never heard that word before. Glad you enjoyed this poem
thxs for your read and review
lulube
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Smiles- Joan
Comment from krys123
Lulube;
Chuckle! Chuckle! I found this very humorous and again you showed your ingenuity, wittiness and your clever fortuitous.
Your imagination I think is wonderful and very inventive as well as ingeniously creative. Talking Ducks!!!
Now I have heard it all.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always, my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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Lulube;
Chuckle! Chuckle! I found this very humorous and again you showed your ingenuity, wittiness and your clever fortuitous.
Your imagination I think is wonderful and very inventive as well as ingeniously creative. Talking Ducks!!!
Now I have heard it all.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always, my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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You shower me with such big worded compliments, Alex, and I love it. lol
glad you liked it, gives me such pleasure
thxs for your review
lulube
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You are so extremely insincerely welcome Lulube.
Alex
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lol
lulube
Comment from country ranch writer
SO WHATS TO TALK ABOUT I WOULD RATHER HIDE MY HEAD THEN TALK THESE DAYS THE DUCK SAID I IF HIDE NO ONE SEES ME CRY AND I DON'T HAVE TO DOTE ON THEM
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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SO WHATS TO TALK ABOUT I WOULD RATHER HIDE MY HEAD THEN TALK THESE DAYS THE DUCK SAID I IF HIDE NO ONE SEES ME CRY AND I DON'T HAVE TO DOTE ON THEM
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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awwwww, you having a bad time Barb, did something happen to the little guys around your place?\
thxs for reading and reviewing.
now that I've almost got my outside up to snuff for winter I can get back into some heavy reviewing, so write write write
lulube
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smile
Comment from Smoothiecool
your chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the ducks conversation trying to get a message across
good visual to portray message
rhyme works well
flows well
cheers smoothiecool
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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your chosen words allow the reader to see and feel the ducks conversation trying to get a message across
good visual to portray message
rhyme works well
flows well
cheers smoothiecool
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014
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thxs for the right response to this Duck Fun style. thxs for reading and reviewing and where are you now?
See any devils of a sort on holidays?
lulube
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in Tassie till the 16th Oct no devil's of any sort LOL
just relaxing after the 4000km drive across Oz
cheers..SC >>Faye
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4000 km drive? I'd say relax, get comatose. What a fascinating journey, hope you took lots of pics.
lulube
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relaxing till I fly home on the 15th Oct.
Some pics as I've done the drive before the other way from Tassie to West Aust in May 2013 when we did 9 weeks traveling around Tasmania which was awesome
This was a mercy return for my friend that will stay indefinitely with her daughter who's husband is ill and out come not looking good on 35
cheers ..SC >.Faye
Comment from lakeport
Don't do that, indeed at last what one can do is to listen, that's a heartfelt expressed poem.thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Don't do that, indeed at last what one can do is to listen, that's a heartfelt expressed poem.thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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thxs for your read and review lakey
lulube
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you are very welcomre.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Dawny53
This is great! It's funny, it seems to have a pretty good rhythm, and it's a breath of fresh air as well! I couldn't help thinking though that if you were to use some explanation marks here and there it would be a funner read for your audience. You seem to be talented enough to know where to place them all on your own! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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This is great! It's funny, it seems to have a pretty good rhythm, and it's a breath of fresh air as well! I couldn't help thinking though that if you were to use some explanation marks here and there it would be a funner read for your audience. You seem to be talented enough to know where to place them all on your own! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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thxs for your great review and suggestion. I guess I assume that everyone knows about Duck Fun poems, They are all dialogue, so I don't even think about putting explanation marks.
lulube
