Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Ah, look at the Cute Little One having fun with his dinner. At that age, your idea of the perfect dinner sure is not what your parents have in mind. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

this is a wonderfully light-hearted piece of poetic art! and an interesting point of view for the love poem poetry contest! you have your unique style and revel in philosophical statements like winnie the pooh. nice on.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!

rebekka x

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

rebekka, thank you so much :-) I appreciate your thoughtful review, contest wishes and generous stars :-) Brooke

Comment from rod007

Excellent

Yeah, it is always effective when it comes in twos, especially the pickles and ketchup, yukky to me, but yummy to young Sawyer. Well done, Brooke.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

rod, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from manicblue

Excellent

This is SO cute! Sawyer I can tell loves and is loved by those around him. Now we know what he loves in his food. Pickles and ketchup and lots of gooey ice cream. lol :D

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Lucretia, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Oatmeal

Exceptional

adewpearl,

I like this one very much. I love the theme, the rhymes and many other things. Oh the pictures! I cannot forget the picture...lol.

There was no SPAG or any other problems.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Oatmeal - glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke

Comment from JW

Excellent

Cute poem. Cute story.

In reading this, one cannot help but smile.

In looking at the pictures, the grin gets even wider.

Thanks for sharing this. JW

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

JW, thank you so much :-) Glad you enjoyed! Brooke

Comment from JudyS

Excellent

Brooke, You always write the best poems and have the coolest pictures of Sawyer. This is another one I really enjoyed. Have a wonderful week. Judy

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Judy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

This made me laugh. What a strange combination. What a beautiful customized Love poem for the little love of your life. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Cajungirl, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

Nice remark line. a love poem for Sawyer. He surely is focused. I especially like the alliterative sound in pants and pocket. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Dallas - I love how focused he looks no matter what the heck he is doing :-) Cute story - yesterday he picked up one of his mother's fairies from her collection. a larger one with a lead body and stained glass butterfly wings - she told him to put it down so he wouldn't break it - "But it's not delicate, Momma" LOL I watched the video a dozen times and laugh every time :-) Brooke

reply by DALLAS01 on 06-Oct-2014

Ha ha. What wonderful years.

Comment from kiwisteveh

Exceptional

I just have to reward this one with a six, if only for the degree of personalisation that has obviously gone into it.

In particular, the last two stanzas with their complementary last lines, show how sweetly this fits together.

Steve

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Steve, thanks so much, my generous friend :-) Brooke