Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

The simple rhyme and short lines show the attention span of a child. The words also exude the feeling that kids find happiness in the simplest things.

This poem also shows the love you have for Sawyer.

Keep writing.

Joan

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Comment from BLACKDYKE

Excellent

Love proves to begin early in life
Brooke, and the lovin' shows in
this wonder full child's imagery.
Another rollicking ride through
childhood. Eric

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

Comment from tdragonfly

Excellent

He is just so cute! Love the poem. Hope you will have one enlarged and framed for his room. what were you thinking, little boys have to have their pockets. When he is a little older they will be for frogs and snakes ect. Did his Moma crave pickle when she was pregnant?

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

Comment from Gargantuan2

Excellent

lol... I like both the poem and the comments. This looks most serious to Sawyer as well. The goo message is one I think all kids like to have a trait of sometime. :)

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

thank you so much, Gargantuan :-) Brooke

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

oh, brooke, he is a man after my own heart, lol. every day I got home from school I would have dill pickles, ketchup and a glass of soda for an afternoon snack. I still snack on pickles

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

sweetjax, you are both delightfully weird :-) Thanks so much. Brooke

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

Looks like sawyer is into some fine dining techniques with a gourmet diet. Life couldn't get any better then dipping pickle chips in ketchup and eating it with your fingers. I'm jealous!

Nicely composed, Brooke. John

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thank you so much, John :-) Yep, he lives the life! LOL :-) Brooke

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

A really cute poem accompanied by the perfect picture. I guarantee this will be the only Love Poem that is entirely devoted to food. Good abcb rhyme throughout and a good read. Great pictures! Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Dorothy, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

Excellent photo's that complement your children's love poem.
You are the second one I found that made it for a grandchild. Nice rhyme and flow.

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Ine, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Brooke...

Pickles and ketchup? Nope, not a thing wrong with that combo. A cheeseburger is just a cheeseburger UNTIL you put the pickles and ketchup on it, then it LIVES!!! Yum...

Love this one!

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Jax, thanks for the humor and the review :-) Brooke

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Brooke;
not to take anything away from your writing, which is masterfully written, but I felt I just read a magnificent Hallmark card. This is an excellent love poem and truly a formidable entry for the contest.
The rhyming roles and throughout the writing and even helps with the rhythmic flow which flow so smoothly throughout the writing.
Your descriptions and expressions Of your imagery involved in appetite on my behalf.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always, Brooke.
Alex
PS: Not only does Sawyer looks like he is munching down heartily but your picture complements your poem so well.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thank you, Alex. You're right - some poems were never meant to be serious literature :-) Brooke

reply by krys123 on 07-Oct-2014

You are so sincerely welcome, my dear friend.
Alex