Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Very lovely, Brooke. Well, I'm with Sawyer, I don't like pants without pockets, either, but he can have his ideal dinner. Not for me. Such a cute poem, for such a sweet little boy. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Miss Sally :-) Brooke

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

It is an endless source of wonder - how big a part Sawyer plays in inspiring your poetry :-) If ever there was a muse. . . .

But really, pickles and ketchup??? Doesn't he know about whipped cream cheese? (with dill spears, of course) LOL

Very cute poem :-)

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Leineco - he has a very limited menu he will eat from and some of it is downright peculiar - but he loves fruit and sweets, which is where we agree LOL :-) Brooke

Comment from Leigh Ann

Excellent

Aww how adorable. I like the rythm and flow and the downright sweetness that's all in this one, Brooke. I take it this is a grand? I could write poems about my grandchildren all day long. Great poem.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Leigh Ann, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from amahra

Excellent

A little boy with keys in his pockets. LOL This was a really fun poem; easy to read with awesome rhythm and rhyming. Always love art work with little Sawyer in them. Great job.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

amahra, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from justjo66

Excellent

So endearing. He is growing so fast. They all do...
Perfect poem as always. I enjoyed this immensely. Can't find anything I would change.

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, justjo - but I don't want him to grow fast! LOL :-) Brooke

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

You know Brooke I already reviewed this poem, but I lost the internet and it was not saved
You have written another wonderful poem including your precious grandson Sawyer.
Great rhymes and more love expressed in this wonderful write.

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thanks, Mary. The same thing has happened to me more than once, so I thank you for taking the time to review a second time :-) Brooke

Comment from bhogg

Excellent

The review gods won't let me say, "smile, smile, smile"' a zillion times. That's what this post does foe me though. As it happens, I just got off the phone with my daughter ... The subject, what those grandkids will eat , and what not! Always warm regards, Bill

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, my smiling friend :-) Brooke

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

Delightful Brooke! Sawyer is my kind of guy with Pickles and Ketchup on a burger....Yum... Great pictures of the little guy to accompany your adorable and sweet love poem.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Janet, thank you so much for your generous and thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Charming love poem. You have me hungry now with syrup on pancakes, berries in the jam and ice cream. You safely locked up a five from me, but yu have the key. Nicely written and it flows well, Blessing, Pat

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

Delightful! What a cute little boy! I remember loving peanut butter with mayonnaise.. how weird is that? As always, your poem was a joy to read, thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 06-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 07-Oct-2014

Dawny, thank you so much :-) pb and mayo - yep, that one is weird! LOL :-) Brooke