Pickles and Ketchup
a love poem for Sawyer151 total reviews
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, what a sweet love poem for Sawyer. Yes,
children do love those pockets. Someday there
may be a frog in that pocket or worms. I like the
giggles and laughter part... that's what the
grandchildren bring us.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Brooke, what a sweet love poem for Sawyer. Yes,
children do love those pockets. Someday there
may be a frog in that pocket or worms. I like the
giggles and laughter part... that's what the
grandchildren bring us.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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heyjude, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Joe_P
When my son was a child, he badly wanted to grow up. I told him not to hurry, to enjoy his childhood because he would be a child just once. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
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When my son was a child, he badly wanted to grow up. I told him not to hurry, to enjoy his childhood because he would be a child just once. Nice job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Joe :-) Brooke
Comment from NadineM
Loved this playful poem! Loved the rhymes and alliteration. This was fun to read aloud and was typically boy-oriented!! I have 2 boys myself and recognized them in the imagery you created with this poem! Boys, pockets and messy food choices... oh yum!! Loved the message of love in this poem. Great writing and of course, amazing photos to complete this piece of art! Thanks for sharing this with me. Best wishes in the contest.
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Loved this playful poem! Loved the rhymes and alliteration. This was fun to read aloud and was typically boy-oriented!! I have 2 boys myself and recognized them in the imagery you created with this poem! Boys, pockets and messy food choices... oh yum!! Loved the message of love in this poem. Great writing and of course, amazing photos to complete this piece of art! Thanks for sharing this with me. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Nadine, for your generous six stars and thoughtful comments. He is all boy and then some. Brooke :-)
Comment from Jay Squires
Oh, what a sweet poem, and such a clever way to show your love for your grands.
OMG, they are so cute. How many have you been blessed with?
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Oh, what a sweet poem, and such a clever way to show your love for your grands.
OMG, they are so cute. How many have you been blessed with?
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from trimple
Blimey, what a combination LOL
I enjoyed reading your love poem, an interesting take on the prompt.
I think that this part should win on its own...
Giggles and laughter,
as much as you please,
as many in number
as waves in the seas.
Original and quite uncomplicated and yet it says so very much.
I wish you well in the competition.
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Blimey, what a combination LOL
I enjoyed reading your love poem, an interesting take on the prompt.
I think that this part should win on its own...
Giggles and laughter,
as much as you please,
as many in number
as waves in the seas.
Original and quite uncomplicated and yet it says so very much.
I wish you well in the competition.
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Tracey - so glad you enjoyed. Sawyer has very strange taste in food, which does NOT come from Grandma. LOL :-) Brooke
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LOL
You're welcome:)
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Brooke, this is so touching and beautiful. Sawyer is so lucky to have such a loving grandparent.
The fact that the little things that make him so unique have been so
lovingly noted is so special.
A perfect love poem and one Sawyer can keep for a lifetime.
Clever, thoughtful and so thoughtfully written with love.
A virtual six 'cos because once again I'm all out of the real ones.
:-) Shirley.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Brooke, this is so touching and beautiful. Sawyer is so lucky to have such a loving grandparent.
The fact that the little things that make him so unique have been so
lovingly noted is so special.
A perfect love poem and one Sawyer can keep for a lifetime.
Clever, thoughtful and so thoughtfully written with love.
A virtual six 'cos because once again I'm all out of the real ones.
:-) Shirley.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Shirley, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from LoannaLois
The reading aloud of this poem tells a story itself. This writer knows her craft, her subject matter, and her way around a beautiful poem.
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The reading aloud of this poem tells a story itself. This writer knows her craft, her subject matter, and her way around a beautiful poem.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Lois, thank you so much for your thoughtful and generous review :-) Brooke
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Really cute and well done. It reminded me of how I used to dip my pickles in BBQ sauce at one of my favorite restaurants. The waiters always thought I was a little weird when I asked for extra pickles to dip in the sauce and I was an adult. Hope you do great in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Really cute and well done. It reminded me of how I used to dip my pickles in BBQ sauce at one of my favorite restaurants. The waiters always thought I was a little weird when I asked for extra pickles to dip in the sauce and I was an adult. Hope you do great in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Rox, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from amada
My faves "pickles and ketchup,
ice cream and goo --" Lovely and light that leaves this reader enchanted and delighted. Oh the so simple pleasures. :-)
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My faves "pickles and ketchup,
ice cream and goo --" Lovely and light that leaves this reader enchanted and delighted. Oh the so simple pleasures. :-)
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from chasennov
a love poem for Sawyer 'Pickles and Ketchup.' I can just imagine wearing a pair of short pants without those pockets. Boys will be boys. Well done.
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a love poem for Sawyer 'Pickles and Ketchup.' I can just imagine wearing a pair of short pants without those pockets. Boys will be boys. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2014
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chasennov, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are most welcome, Brooke.
