Pickles and Ketchup
a love poem for Sawyer151 total reviews
Comment from padumachitta
Hi Sweet, pickles and tomato ketchup...maybe not. How about maple syrup on sausages, that's the Canadian one...or dried chilies and honey on pizza...I digress.
I enjoyed this different kind of love poem.
padumachitta
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Hi Sweet, pickles and tomato ketchup...maybe not. How about maple syrup on sausages, that's the Canadian one...or dried chilies and honey on pizza...I digress.
I enjoyed this different kind of love poem.
padumachitta
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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thanks so much, padumachitta, so far Sawyer the picky eater does not eat any meat or pizza either LOL Brooke
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My neice went (what felt like years) eating spagettie with peanut butter....
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peanut butter is one of his very short list of foods - why does it make everyone's list? LOL
Comment from lynglyng
Great poem with a happy feel to it. I liked the picture of sawyer. The poem makes you have a feeling that life is good and we should be careful to appreciate the little moments in life because they are what great memories are made of. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Great poem with a happy feel to it. I liked the picture of sawyer. The poem makes you have a feeling that life is good and we should be careful to appreciate the little moments in life because they are what great memories are made of. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, lynglyng :-) Brooke
Comment from Genya
A great children's poem dedicated to Sawyer. Lovely accompanying picture as well. Certainly shows lots of love and happiness. Loved the second stanza giggles and laughter as many in number as waves in the sea. One happy little boy whose so loved. Genya
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A great children's poem dedicated to Sawyer. Lovely accompanying picture as well. Certainly shows lots of love and happiness. Loved the second stanza giggles and laughter as many in number as waves in the sea. One happy little boy whose so loved. Genya
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Brooke. This is certainly an imaginative piece of romantic poetry and very original, ie, not the usual love and marriage go together like a horse and carriage. "Pickles and ketchup, ice cream and goo." Good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Hi Brooke. This is certainly an imaginative piece of romantic poetry and very original, ie, not the usual love and marriage go together like a horse and carriage. "Pickles and ketchup, ice cream and goo." Good luck.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Wendyanne, nope, not the usual, thank goodness :-) Brooke
Comment from w.j.debi
A delightful love poem with all the things that are important to Sawyer. I bet he is smiling and laughing when Miranda reads it to him. I hope someone is compiling these poems in a book so he will have them to treasure and pass on to his children. This is such a wonderful gift to give as you love comes through.
I love the simple rhythm and rhyme that make this very catchy to read aloud.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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A delightful love poem with all the things that are important to Sawyer. I bet he is smiling and laughing when Miranda reads it to him. I hope someone is compiling these poems in a book so he will have them to treasure and pass on to his children. This is such a wonderful gift to give as you love comes through.
I love the simple rhythm and rhyme that make this very catchy to read aloud.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Debi - yep, we're collecting them all :-) Brooke
Comment from ravenblack
Pickles and ketchup- sounds like my kids - ketchup on everything. But we accept their concoctions just as we celebrate that which makes them unique. One I learned from my grandfather that actually tastes really good- peanut butter and pickle relish. Try it!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Pickles and ketchup- sounds like my kids - ketchup on everything. But we accept their concoctions just as we celebrate that which makes them unique. One I learned from my grandfather that actually tastes really good- peanut butter and pickle relish. Try it!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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ravenblack, the kid gets his taste for pickles from his mother, not from his mother's mother LOL Thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Glasstruth
Yummy! What a delicious poem. It doesn't have to say much, but be well written, and that it is. It shows what a treat life is. Very uplifting. Thanks for putting a smile on my face. :))) Les
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Yummy! What a delicious poem. It doesn't have to say much, but be well written, and that it is. It shows what a treat life is. Very uplifting. Thanks for putting a smile on my face. :))) Les
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is more like you, Brooke, bright and bubbly. What lovely photos, I think I can see cucumber in that bowl. Your poem has lots of lovely concoctions in it, making it such fun to read. I have decided I will only write fun poems from now on, at least for a while. I love this one. I am off on holiday on Tuesday, so won't be on here for ten days. I will catch up then. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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This is more like you, Brooke, bright and bubbly. What lovely photos, I think I can see cucumber in that bowl. Your poem has lots of lovely concoctions in it, making it such fun to read. I have decided I will only write fun poems from now on, at least for a while. I love this one. I am off on holiday on Tuesday, so won't be on here for ten days. I will catch up then. :) Sandra
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Yep, slices of a pickled cucumber :-) Thanks so much, Sandra - have a lovely holiday! :-) Brooke
Comment from rama devi
Cute and charming. Well penned, with good rhythm and rhyme. I bet Sawyer loved this...especially the lines with Pickles and ketchup in the same sentence with ice cream and goo. :)
God alliteration and consonance of P in these lines:
Pants with a pocket,
Pickles and ketchup,
perfect companions
Nice presentation too.
Love,
rd
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Cute and charming. Well penned, with good rhythm and rhyme. I bet Sawyer loved this...especially the lines with Pickles and ketchup in the same sentence with ice cream and goo. :)
God alliteration and consonance of P in these lines:
Pants with a pocket,
Pickles and ketchup,
perfect companions
Nice presentation too.
Love,
rd
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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rama devi, thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke
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Comment from Neonewman
Wow! This was absolutely wonderful, I love pickles and ketchup and pickles and popcorn, I could go on and on. But when I child so innocently loves the same thing, it makes me wonder if I am just a child at heart lol. God Bless!
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Wow! This was absolutely wonderful, I love pickles and ketchup and pickles and popcorn, I could go on and on. But when I child so innocently loves the same thing, it makes me wonder if I am just a child at heart lol. God Bless!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
