Pickles and Ketchup
a love poem for Sawyer151 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is great poem and so nice individualized to Sawyer and his favorite things. A wonderful entry for the contest. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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This is great poem and so nice individualized to Sawyer and his favorite things. A wonderful entry for the contest. Have a blessed day, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Debbie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from SteveY
Another nice little rhyming quatrain poem. Easy reading and it just flows along like all of your creative poems. Thanks for sharing this one.
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Another nice little rhyming quatrain poem. Easy reading and it just flows along like all of your creative poems. Thanks for sharing this one.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
My grandson loves pickles too and cucumbers which we call prepickles with dips...what he calls ranch dressing or ketchup...they are sooo cute these precious darling boys
God bless
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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My grandson loves pickles too and cucumbers which we call prepickles with dips...what he calls ranch dressing or ketchup...they are sooo cute these precious darling boys
God bless
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Jenny, thank you so mjuch :-) I love the idea of cucumbers as prepickles LOL I appreciate your sixth star. Brooke :-)
Comment from IndianaIrish
It's wonderful how you convey his adorable personality and all the things he loves. I can relate to the pocket thing ... To keep my Kleenex close. Lol. I enjoyed your poem and your love for this little guy is present in every word.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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It's wonderful how you convey his adorable personality and all the things he loves. I can relate to the pocket thing ... To keep my Kleenex close. Lol. I enjoyed your poem and your love for this little guy is present in every word.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Karyn, thank you so much :-) He keeps his keys and stones and shells close :-) Brooke
Comment from Ben Colder
Love it. Look at him. Enjoying the moment. Good wording , Brooke. Another great tribute to the one and only, Sawyer. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Love it. Look at him. Enjoying the moment. Good wording , Brooke. Another great tribute to the one and only, Sawyer. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Colder, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Little boys needs pockets to keep their most treasured objects and they have many. I also believe little boys need pets to help while on their safaris in search for all those treasures. Needless to say I LOVED your poem. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Little boys needs pockets to keep their most treasured objects and they have many. I also believe little boys need pets to help while on their safaris in search for all those treasures. Needless to say I LOVED your poem. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Barbara, thank you - yep, he is a treasure collector and a treasure hoarder and a treasure transporter :-) Grandma will be giving him a box and a bag to hold treasures for Christmas with a few strings of Mardi Gras beads to add to his treasure. LOL Let the other relatives and friends spend the big bucks. :-) Brooke
Comment from nancy_e_davis
When I was pregnant I put onion slices in the dill pickle jars and ate them on Peanut butter sandwiches. Isn't that crazy? It was quite tasty though. The Dr. would say there is something in it he needs. That's what they told me when my son ate dirt. LOL Cute poem Brooke. Nancy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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When I was pregnant I put onion slices in the dill pickle jars and ate them on Peanut butter sandwiches. Isn't that crazy? It was quite tasty though. The Dr. would say there is something in it he needs. That's what they told me when my son ate dirt. LOL Cute poem Brooke. Nancy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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That sounds downright nasty, Nancy LOL And that is why doctors make the big bucks ;-) Thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Nosha17
Will he laugh when he finds out what he loved to eat! I think all kids have those fad menus. Cute poem with excellent rhyming and upbeat humour. The pictures are precious. Faye
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Will he laugh when he finds out what he loved to eat! I think all kids have those fad menus. Cute poem with excellent rhyming and upbeat humour. The pictures are precious. Faye
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2014
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Faye, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from humpwhistle
Hey a man has the right to eat cucumbers and tomatoes
any way that he wishes. And the always reason I wear pants
is because I didn't come with pockets. A design flaw you'd think would have been rectified by now. I've sent dozens of emails.
Nice take on the love poem contest, Brooke. Especially customized like this.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Hey a man has the right to eat cucumbers and tomatoes
any way that he wishes. And the always reason I wear pants
is because I didn't come with pockets. A design flaw you'd think would have been rectified by now. I've sent dozens of emails.
Nice take on the love poem contest, Brooke. Especially customized like this.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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He actually refuses to wear pants without pockets LOL It's good to know that his quirkiness might someday give him the same quirky sense of humor you have :-) Thanks so much, Lee, for your generous and humorous response to this poem :-) Go Eagles! :-) Brooke
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Yeah, yeah, Go Iggles . . . and don't stop.
Giants are in a tight one. How 'bout the Iggs?
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The Eagles are ahead 27-7 - but the other team is moving. but wait, the other guys just fumbled. :-) Gotta tell ya, I never say anything nice about the Giants, even for you ;-) Brooke
Comment from c_lucas
You will have to work fast to outwit Sawyer. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very humorous read.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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You will have to work fast to outwit Sawyer. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very humorous read.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Charlie, thanks so much - I wouldn't even attempt to outwit that boy! LOL :-) Brooke
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