Torrents of Tears
Halloween-inspired poem120 total reviews
Comment from fastdigits
And so once again it is that time
when witches and goblins and
all sorts of ghouls are on the
loose, and so to really appreciate
this special day, where would one
turn to, but the talented artist who
writes with a flair on subjects that
others would not dare.
And so my bit of rhyme, certainly not
anywhere as talented as yours.
Well done
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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And so once again it is that time
when witches and goblins and
all sorts of ghouls are on the
loose, and so to really appreciate
this special day, where would one
turn to, but the talented artist who
writes with a flair on subjects that
others would not dare.
And so my bit of rhyme, certainly not
anywhere as talented as yours.
Well done
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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thank you so much, fastdigits :-) Brooke
Comment from lakeport
Torrents of tears, I don't think litte Sawyer ever looks that sad, that's a scary and spooky Halloween night, I enjoyed reading the poem,God bless you, Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Torrents of tears, I don't think litte Sawyer ever looks that sad, that's a scary and spooky Halloween night, I enjoyed reading the poem,God bless you, Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Erich, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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you are very welcome Brooke,Hugs!Erich
Comment from amahra
Oh, he hit his head. Grandmother always said, never let a child nap or go to sleep right after hitting their head. Don't know if that's an old wives' tale. Anyway, hope Sawyer is okay. Wonderful poem with sad lyrics and good rhymes to match. Can't wait to see what Sawyer is going to be on Halloween. Smile.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Oh, he hit his head. Grandmother always said, never let a child nap or go to sleep right after hitting their head. Don't know if that's an old wives' tale. Anyway, hope Sawyer is okay. Wonderful poem with sad lyrics and good rhymes to match. Can't wait to see what Sawyer is going to be on Halloween. Smile.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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amahra, thank you so much :-) He's fine -he screamed long enough to make Nora feel guilty, and then he went back to fooling around with her. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment from Kenneth Schaal
That's a dramatic six star poster; the wee bi-meter verse is a technical masterpiece. Alliteration plus, plus rhyme, and some dramatics of its own. Kenny
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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That's a dramatic six star poster; the wee bi-meter verse is a technical masterpiece. Alliteration plus, plus rhyme, and some dramatics of its own. Kenny
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Kenny, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from MissMerri
I haven't been much in the Halloween mood yet but I think this scary poem has done the trick. This is so clever and so neatly put together... I don't think you left any scary feature out. I enjoyed it three times... Now I'm in the mood to write a Halloween poem. Thank you!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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I haven't been much in the Halloween mood yet but I think this scary poem has done the trick. This is so clever and so neatly put together... I don't think you left any scary feature out. I enjoyed it three times... Now I'm in the mood to write a Halloween poem. Thank you!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Adonna, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Glasstruth
You've definitely caught the spirit of Halloween. Nice continuous use of 'ing' words, makes it very much in the present. Of course, the rhyming is as smooth as ever. One of your great strengths. Wonderfully crafted. Les
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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You've definitely caught the spirit of Halloween. Nice continuous use of 'ing' words, makes it very much in the present. Of course, the rhyming is as smooth as ever. One of your great strengths. Wonderfully crafted. Les
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Les, Thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Andrewajgblue
A great poem, your alliteration is brilliant, and some great assonance,I thought it was very succinct and elouquent , congratulations on this scary Halloween poem,
Andrew
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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A great poem, your alliteration is brilliant, and some great assonance,I thought it was very succinct and elouquent , congratulations on this scary Halloween poem,
Andrew
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Andrew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from misscookie
I see we have an artist in the make/ LOL
I'm not a big fan of Halloween poems
yet this one, I most say was nice.
You had my attention from the start.
It's nice when I don't have to lose my heart! LOL
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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I see we have an artist in the make/ LOL
I'm not a big fan of Halloween poems
yet this one, I most say was nice.
You had my attention from the start.
It's nice when I don't have to lose my heart! LOL
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2014
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Miss Cookie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Oh, this certainly brings halloween to
mind - a clever use of words, my friend,
with great rhythm and rhyme.
Not a night we make a big thing of over here,
altho I do know they do in the States.
Love the new picture of Sawyer - bless him.
Margaret
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Oh, this certainly brings halloween to
mind - a clever use of words, my friend,
with great rhythm and rhyme.
Not a night we make a big thing of over here,
altho I do know they do in the States.
Love the new picture of Sawyer - bless him.
Margaret
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Margaret, thank you so very much, my most thoughtful friend :-) This kid has never taken a bad picture ;-) Brooke
Comment from Eric1
Hi Brooke this is a wonderful, wonderfully expressed Halloween poem, it is a veritable cornucopia of alliteration and excellent rhyming, beautiful flow finishes it nicely.
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Hi Brooke this is a wonderful, wonderfully expressed Halloween poem, it is a veritable cornucopia of alliteration and excellent rhyming, beautiful flow finishes it nicely.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
