Torrents of Tears
Halloween-inspired poem120 total reviews
Comment from Nosha17
I am sure all the Halloween delights will be enjoyed by your grandson, probably just up his street. Hope he is better after his knock. Good use of alliterative language, excellent rhyming and a most enjoyable read. Faye
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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I am sure all the Halloween delights will be enjoyed by your grandson, probably just up his street. Hope he is better after his knock. Good use of alliterative language, excellent rhyming and a most enjoyable read. Faye
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Faye, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from tbacha58
gnashing of teeth,
wailings of fright,
ghouls on the loose --
Halloween night.
Hi Brooke, a beautiful song in a poem, so fluently is your poem to read, so beautifully rhymed. Children and grown ups will so enjoy that poem.
I wander what Sawyer will be wearing. Miss him. Love Terry xoxo
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gnashing of teeth,
wailings of fright,
ghouls on the loose --
Halloween night.
Hi Brooke, a beautiful song in a poem, so fluently is your poem to read, so beautifully rhymed. Children and grown ups will so enjoy that poem.
I wander what Sawyer will be wearing. Miss him. Love Terry xoxo
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from ravenblack
Yay! Halloween is around the corner!. Time to get my human costume... great alliteration and though slightly gruesome, a joyful celebration of Halloween.
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Yay! Halloween is around the corner!. Time to get my human costume... great alliteration and though slightly gruesome, a joyful celebration of Halloween.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from nomi338
Yikes! I think I'll just stay at home and hide underneath my bed. Hoping that I'll wake up tomorrow and not find out I'm dead. I will check both my legs to see if they are there. Hoping that they did not run away from some scare. Sorry Brooke, but you always inspire me to write, write. My job here is to review and enjoy your poetry. Which I always do. I fear I may have run out of superlatives to describe your work and so to cover this I respond with whatever. LOL. This poem is another fine example of the qualative work on your part. Cangratulations
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Yikes! I think I'll just stay at home and hide underneath my bed. Hoping that I'll wake up tomorrow and not find out I'm dead. I will check both my legs to see if they are there. Hoping that they did not run away from some scare. Sorry Brooke, but you always inspire me to write, write. My job here is to review and enjoy your poetry. Which I always do. I fear I may have run out of superlatives to describe your work and so to cover this I respond with whatever. LOL. This poem is another fine example of the qualative work on your part. Cangratulations
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, nomi, for your wonderfully gracious comments :-) Brooke
Comment from robina1978
His drawing is fine for such a young age. So is your Halloween poem. They complement each other so well. Nice rhyme too.
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His drawing is fine for such a young age. So is your Halloween poem. They complement each other so well. Nice rhyme too.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from trimple
Hi Brooke
What a great Halloween poem. Your grandson's picture has a great deal of emotion attached to it, and the fiery red emphasises this further... Very strong picture for a young man.
I think this line...
'galleons of ghosts'
should win a contest all on its own LOL Terrific line!
It is so childlike, and yet sits perfectly with your well composed poem.
kind regards
tracey :)
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Hi Brooke
What a great Halloween poem. Your grandson's picture has a great deal of emotion attached to it, and the fiery red emphasises this further... Very strong picture for a young man.
I think this line...
'galleons of ghosts'
should win a contest all on its own LOL Terrific line!
It is so childlike, and yet sits perfectly with your well composed poem.
kind regards
tracey :)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from Debra White
Hi Brooke :)
I enjoyed your Halloween poem. I especially liked the rhythm, it reminded me of a train (maybe a ghost train!)
Fab use of alliteration throughout in this atmospheric poem.
Love Nora's picture. Is Nora about 6 or 7? I'm guessing because the hands on her drawings look like hands that my Katie draws, like open flowers!
Kind regards, Debra :) x
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Hi Brooke :)
I enjoyed your Halloween poem. I especially liked the rhythm, it reminded me of a train (maybe a ghost train!)
Fab use of alliteration throughout in this atmospheric poem.
Love Nora's picture. Is Nora about 6 or 7? I'm guessing because the hands on her drawings look like hands that my Katie draws, like open flowers!
Kind regards, Debra :) x
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Scary stuff here, with alliteration, no less. Forget about scaring the kids... I'll have nightmares from THIS! LOL! Nora did a terrific job capturing Sawyer's expression, didn't she? LOL! :)
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Scary stuff here, with alliteration, no less. Forget about scaring the kids... I'll have nightmares from THIS! LOL! Nora did a terrific job capturing Sawyer's expression, didn't she? LOL! :)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from drivenbackward
Just when I thought I was already tired of Halloween poems, you came up with something fun and original. Good poem, Brooke. Enjoyed.
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Just when I thought I was already tired of Halloween poems, you came up with something fun and original. Good poem, Brooke. Enjoyed.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
awe, I am sorry he bumped his noggin, but I'm glad it inspired this alliterative poem for us to read. she's a talented little girl. I enjoyed reading this....
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awe, I am sorry he bumped his noggin, but I'm glad it inspired this alliterative poem for us to read. she's a talented little girl. I enjoyed reading this....
Comment Written 08-Oct-2014
