Fog
Halloween-inspired poem NOT for children130 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I totally agree with you, Brooke, I often think it is the innocents that suffer most, and for why? I don't know. But, you are right in that you cannot buy your way into anything, it has to be earned, and even then it is not guaranteed. This is a totally different poem from you, Brooke, and I agreed with every word. Excellent. Should have waited till tomorrow, it would have been a 6. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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I totally agree with you, Brooke, I often think it is the innocents that suffer most, and for why? I don't know. But, you are right in that you cannot buy your way into anything, it has to be earned, and even then it is not guaranteed. This is a totally different poem from you, Brooke, and I agreed with every word. Excellent. Should have waited till tomorrow, it would have been a 6. :) Sandra
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Sandra, thank you so very much, my generous and thoughtful friend :-) Sadly, I do not believe good outcomes in this earthly life are earned - it is all random, which scares many folks. Brooke
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I think you are right about that, too, Brooke. Things have changed so much, I find sometimes that I am questioning God, and that is an awful thing to admit and frightening.
Comment from Gargantuan2
I understood the meaning before the explanation, but I agree with you on the ministry of things. I have my favorite ones and it's the down to Earth ones I enjoy most. I hate being preached upon about materialistic avenues when I see those preaching with more material than those they preach to.
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I understood the meaning before the explanation, but I agree with you on the ministry of things. I have my favorite ones and it's the down to Earth ones I enjoy most. I hate being preached upon about materialistic avenues when I see those preaching with more material than those they preach to.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
Comment from GWHARGIS
I agree completely. Life owes you nothing. You get and you give. It rains and then it shines. Working at a pharmacy I see some of the nicest people coming in and telling us they have cancer or heart disease...then I get those who doctor shop for oxycodone, don't bother paying their rent and then sell half of their Rx. It is a stupid assumption that God will reward with what's behind door number three for coming to church. LOL. Good little rant.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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I agree completely. Life owes you nothing. You get and you give. It rains and then it shines. Working at a pharmacy I see some of the nicest people coming in and telling us they have cancer or heart disease...then I get those who doctor shop for oxycodone, don't bother paying their rent and then sell half of their Rx. It is a stupid assumption that God will reward with what's behind door number three for coming to church. LOL. Good little rant.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Gretchen, thank you for your most insightful response to this poem
Brooke
Comment from Dawny53
That's ok Brooke, there are times I enjoy authors notes more then I do the poem.. not the case here... I enjoy reading poetry that means something or receiving a message that is intwined within the writers words. I know intwined is probably not the correct word here, but I love the word anyhow.. thanks for sharing, it was an enjoyable read, as were your notes!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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That's ok Brooke, there are times I enjoy authors notes more then I do the poem.. not the case here... I enjoy reading poetry that means something or receiving a message that is intwined within the writers words. I know intwined is probably not the correct word here, but I love the word anyhow.. thanks for sharing, it was an enjoyable read, as were your notes!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Dawny :-) Brooke
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Brooke,
I loved your rant as well as your poem. My sister and I recently have been discussing this same topic. I think having faith is the best way to deal with negativities, but we mustn't be blind to the 'new adage' - shit happens, lol.
I'm enjoying this other side to your personality which is showing through your poetry. Fog is a terrific metaphor that worked so well in this piece.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Hi Brooke,
I loved your rant as well as your poem. My sister and I recently have been discussing this same topic. I think having faith is the best way to deal with negativities, but we mustn't be blind to the 'new adage' - shit happens, lol.
I'm enjoying this other side to your personality which is showing through your poetry. Fog is a terrific metaphor that worked so well in this piece.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Lou, thank you so much for your insightful response to this poem and its message :-) Brooke
Comment from Adri7enne
It's true we can't control a thing in this outer world. All we can control is our reaction to what happens - and even that can be the product of our upbringing.
As always, I enjoyed your spotless rhymes and rhythm. Loved your little rant. I guess we can't blame people for their misery. We are mostly innocent pawns of fate. Good to remember that the 'other' is a reflection of who we are. Well said, Brooke.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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It's true we can't control a thing in this outer world. All we can control is our reaction to what happens - and even that can be the product of our upbringing.
As always, I enjoyed your spotless rhymes and rhythm. Loved your little rant. I guess we can't blame people for their misery. We are mostly innocent pawns of fate. Good to remember that the 'other' is a reflection of who we are. Well said, Brooke.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Adrienne, for your insightful and generous response to this poem's message :-) Brooke
Comment from N.K. Wagner
You're right, Brooke. People don't necessarily "deserve" the troubles and foul ends they encounter in this life. (And if Divine Mercy is truly in effect, maybe we won't get what we strictly deserve in the next one, either.) Beautifully done. Chilling. :) nancy
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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You're right, Brooke. People don't necessarily "deserve" the troubles and foul ends they encounter in this life. (And if Divine Mercy is truly in effect, maybe we won't get what we strictly deserve in the next one, either.) Beautifully done. Chilling. :) nancy
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Nancy, thank you so much for your thoughtful response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from misscookie
I know this wasn't to be read by kids,
I took a chance and now I scared,
These things really get to ne. I must say it was good.
Good bye my friend.
Scary Cookie
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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I know this wasn't to be read by kids,
I took a chance and now I scared,
These things really get to ne. I must say it was good.
Good bye my friend.
Scary Cookie
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Miss Cookie :-) Brooke
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You're very welcome, have a safe and blessed week end.
Cookie
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Brooke,
The theme of this piece of poetry is crystal clear even without the Author Notes!
Wording is simple as well as impressive.
Smooth and spontaneous flow throughout the poem with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
You are adept at weaving the beautiful words having a deep inner sense and this art deserves to be honored with SIX STARS!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Hello Brooke,
The theme of this piece of poetry is crystal clear even without the Author Notes!
Wording is simple as well as impressive.
Smooth and spontaneous flow throughout the poem with lovely rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
You are adept at weaving the beautiful words having a deep inner sense and this art deserves to be honored with SIX STARS!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, RP, for your generous six stars and your most encouraging comments :-) Brooke
Comment from mikemagine
Great, relevant poem. Yes, too many TV clowns say nonsense like YOU REALLY CAN MOVE MOUNTAINS! I'm exaggerating, but yes, you're so right! Too many of those boobs yap too much WITHOUT true knowledge!
Thanks for sharing this and re-alerting us reg. the things that CAN befall even good people in this life!
Mike
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Great, relevant poem. Yes, too many TV clowns say nonsense like YOU REALLY CAN MOVE MOUNTAINS! I'm exaggerating, but yes, you're so right! Too many of those boobs yap too much WITHOUT true knowledge!
Thanks for sharing this and re-alerting us reg. the things that CAN befall even good people in this life!
Mike
Comment Written 04-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Mike, thank you for your thoughtful reading of this poem :-) Brooke
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Sure thing, Brooke:)
