Fog
Halloween-inspired poem NOT for children130 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
What an awesome piece you have wisely written and is absolutely well received. The devil is the thief who robs us of our loved ones with such dreadful things as cancer etc. I enjoyed your, "Little rant" as you named it. Sometimes it is necessary to let off a little steam. Loved the work as usual, God Bless!
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What an awesome piece you have wisely written and is absolutely well received. The devil is the thief who robs us of our loved ones with such dreadful things as cancer etc. I enjoyed your, "Little rant" as you named it. Sometimes it is necessary to let off a little steam. Loved the work as usual, God Bless!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
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Neonewman, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from lynglyng
This is a great poem. It is well written and draws the reader in and captivates them to the end. I liked the flow and message of this poem.Thank you for sharing.
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This is a great poem. It is well written and draws the reader in and captivates them to the end. I liked the flow and message of this poem.Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
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lynglyng, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Brooke this is another very well written piece of poetry with a good rhythm and rhyme scheme. This is another extremely thought-provoking piece and I enjoyed reading your author's notes too.
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Hi Brooke this is another very well written piece of poetry with a good rhythm and rhyme scheme. This is another extremely thought-provoking piece and I enjoyed reading your author's notes too.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
Comment from thee-name
Good poem. DON'T T, V. EVANGELISTS TYPES. THEY BOTHER ME TOO.
WITH THE FOG THE SCREAMERS ARE HID
NO CARE FOR WHAT THE SCREAMERS DID
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Good poem. DON'T T, V. EVANGELISTS TYPES. THEY BOTHER ME TOO.
WITH THE FOG THE SCREAMERS ARE HID
NO CARE FOR WHAT THE SCREAMERS DID
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
Comment from MAB
Great piece. lovely rhythm of lines. Has a true meaning in your notes. Something I think the open minded can most relate to this piece. No one knows what an afterlife will be (if there is one) but it is my belief that we all want to be loved in our physiological state of being comfort, sex, compassion things like that. You have an eclectic mind Brooke. Keep up the great writing.
Regards
SAM
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Great piece. lovely rhythm of lines. Has a true meaning in your notes. Something I think the open minded can most relate to this piece. No one knows what an afterlife will be (if there is one) but it is my belief that we all want to be loved in our physiological state of being comfort, sex, compassion things like that. You have an eclectic mind Brooke. Keep up the great writing.
Regards
SAM
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, SAM, for your generous rating and thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from heyjude
Brooke, very well written. I agree wholeheartedly
with your rant. We are not promised a care free
life no matter how hard we try to be good. When
bad things happen it is amazing the faith that
shines through in some. We don't earn a life
without trials.
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Brooke, very well written. I agree wholeheartedly
with your rant. We are not promised a care free
life no matter how hard we try to be good. When
bad things happen it is amazing the faith that
shines through in some. We don't earn a life
without trials.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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thanks so much, heyjude, for your thoughtful comments :-) Brooke
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Very philosophical indeed and a subject well worth commenting on.
Your comments are thoughtful and bear strong truths which are well worth thinking about.
An inspiring poem with perfect rhyme and meter.
Thanks for sharing.
:-) Shirley
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Very philosophical indeed and a subject well worth commenting on.
Your comments are thoughtful and bear strong truths which are well worth thinking about.
An inspiring poem with perfect rhyme and meter.
Thanks for sharing.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
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Shirley, thank you so much for your generous rating and thoughtful review :-) brooke
Comment from Dutchie
This is a poem to ponder, Brooke. It is no guaranty when you live a decent life, you meet no troubles on your way. Fate is like mist, it looms when you don't expect it. It is a lesson of life and we have to deal with it.
Wonderful poem with great rhyme. Loved it!! Fia
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This is a poem to ponder, Brooke. It is no guaranty when you live a decent life, you meet no troubles on your way. Fate is like mist, it looms when you don't expect it. It is a lesson of life and we have to deal with it.
Wonderful poem with great rhyme. Loved it!! Fia
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Fia, thank you so very much for your generous and thoughtful review and comments. :-) Brooke
Comment from Aussie
I totally agree with you; no matter how good we are; we are not immune from catastrophe in our lives. Lessons, good or bad are made to be experienced; that is how we learn. It would seem to me - the nicest, kindest folks are the ones that suffer the most. The barstools are the ones who seem to get away with blue murder - in the end? I liked the lesson in your poem. You are using a different tack from a voice at the back - makes them sit up and take notice (I hope.) Well done my philosophical nana.
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I totally agree with you; no matter how good we are; we are not immune from catastrophe in our lives. Lessons, good or bad are made to be experienced; that is how we learn. It would seem to me - the nicest, kindest folks are the ones that suffer the most. The barstools are the ones who seem to get away with blue murder - in the end? I liked the lesson in your poem. You are using a different tack from a voice at the back - makes them sit up and take notice (I hope.) Well done my philosophical nana.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
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Kay, thank you so very much, my generous and most insightful friend :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
The first few lines reminded me of the movie, The Fog, which for its time was truly terrifying. But I get your deeper meaning, but won't discuss my own views on religion as people often get offended. This is very well written.
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The first few lines reminded me of the movie, The Fog, which for its time was truly terrifying. But I get your deeper meaning, but won't discuss my own views on religion as people often get offended. This is very well written.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
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CR, thank you so much :-) Brooke
