Comment from granny goes viral

Excellent

I totally understand "foot in mouth". Loved poem. Would laugh, but have my foot stuck in my mouth. The getting in trouble part, ah ha. Really? How so? FS is the flag bearer for Free Speech. So long as I don't holler "fire" in a crowded movie theater.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks Granny got into trouble with Tom for adding extra chapters thing is as Mikey said it was not a total repeat of old there was a lot of new in the added parts to the chapters. NO more now sadly. Thanks for coming by. it was a rant ok.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Open mouth, insert foot.
Add spices to it savory
Please note the finish product
egress same way.
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This is very well written.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks mate I may add soe more verses to it later ha!

reply by c_lucas on 03-Oct-2014

You're welcome Geoff. Charlie

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very funny cartoon caricature of yourself, back,when you were a younger man, a very funny poem that backs this cartoon depicting you as a young man, well done, bro, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

It was a rant mate. I made the big big big mistake of talking to Tom about what I was doing splitting the big chapters. He says I breached the rules. But everyone has enjoyed the smaller chapters and several have acknowledged the smaller new chapter has not only contained some of the stuff from the big cxhapter I have added more. But my fault for saying anything. Another bro in the Lord in here said if I had not told Tom what I was doing I could have gone on with it but no more now!! :( From now on anything I write will have smaller and more chapters ha!Thanks mate. God Bless.

Comment from humpwhistle

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Yes, it is pretty easy to say too much around here.
Some of us do it in our posts. Others do in reviews.
Maybe it's a malady common to writers in general.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks Lee yeah my fault I won't go into details but I hope you will have a look at some of my chapters of my book. The poem kind of stems from the conclusion of that activity. Thanks for coming by.

Comment from James Dooney

Excellent

I do quite like this little limerick here so i do. You have done well. The pic is also a nice little accompaniment too ! well done !

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks James it was purely a rant mate. Something I did and admitted it to my peril to the big boss of FS got me into trouble hence my rant. Can go further if desired. Nice to meet another new friend.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Sankey, this reads as though you have done some despicable act, or you have 'put your foot in it', partly a limerick, but not quite my friend, loved it anyway.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Yeah said too much to Tom on FS ha! Should have kept my mouth shut. have you read any of my new plit off chapters they contain soe of the old bigger but thee is new content in there.

reply by Eric1 on 03-Oct-2014

No Sankey, but I will take a look my friend.

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks we have met before right?

reply by Eric1 on 03-Oct-2014

Only on this site my friend, I have reviewed your work before.

reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks mate thought your nick looked familiar.

reply by Eric1 on 03-Oct-2014

LOL.

Comment from 4hisglory

Good

You are not the only one who says too much. I don't have a clue what it is about, but I feel the pain, cause I've been there many times.

You have the style of the limerick but the flow is not as it should be for that type of poetry. The middle two line should be shorter than the other three. For example:

When he opened his mouth
The words went straight south

Thanks for sharing from the heart. Blessings, LaVonne

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Hi Friend. I said too much to Tom should have shut up about splitting the old big chapters to smaller in my Autobiography. As Mikey said it is not as though the new chapters contained only the old stuff from before I did have new content in there but oh well feel better now I ranted hehe thanks again.

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

I awesome read, this poem took me many places, some are old and forgotten but other are just waiting to kick me in the a...thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks Ronnie it was a rant from something I did today that would have been better not done. I was spliitting off smaller chapters from big ones in my autobiography. Should not have said anything to Tom and it might have just been missed bty him! Grrr. Thanks for coming by.

Comment from LIJ Red

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Your phrasing sounded other than heartland USA so I visited
your profile. You and my dead wife were born on the same day. Cahill's review did not clue me what's going on, so I'll just say, nice rant. G'day.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks Red. I spoke too soon. Seems Tom would not have known about me cutting old larger chapters of my autobiography and making new chapters mind you the split was not only just the original large chapter content I have had more inspiration since I wrote the first round. If you have not looked at my autobiography jump in on the new chapters where there is still rewards. Thanks for coming by.

Comment from michaelcahill

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Hahaha. I love the precision with which the foot is properly extended at a perfect angle and inserted neatly in place. It seems to be a well-practiced ritual!!!! This is a scream. mikey

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 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks mate we need a Tangent Man Union ha! I think there is at least one other of us in FS. Old Tom (not him by the way) may have brought on himself more sorrow than he can handle by his castigation of me! as I said from now on more chapters shorter and more pictures yippee!! Wait till my Mum's 'Megoirs' come on FS ha! (Mum was affectionately known as Aunty Meg by fellow bible college students and others.