Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

Yeah, I get that a lot :) It is almost certain that if you go on a rant at FS, you will offend someone. There are some very sensitive people here :)

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014

Ah well I should have kept my mouth shut about my extra parts to the chapters I was having a great time. But I guess I got most of what I needed to add on anyhow. Thanks again.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Oh my!!! I don't know what you are talking about, my day job keeps me too busy, but I am sure this site is like everything else.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014

Yeah I should not have told Tom I was adding to my chapters of my autobiography should have just kept going. No more after about chapter 10 part 2 now :(

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I like your poem. It is a limerick, right? The picture is very fitting. I see nothing to change. I do not know the story you alluded to on FS, but that is another time and place. Good job and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014

I said too much to Tom about adding second parts to my Autobiography chapters. should have kept quiet. Honesty gets me into trouble.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I love limericks and this is a good one, Another example of a clean limerick. Keep writing them and sharing, Blesssings, Pat

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014

Thanks pat is it. Appreciate your review.

Comment from JudyS

Excellent

Sankey, This is just too cute and funny. Yes, sometimes we all 'open mouth, insert foot, do not pass go, do not collect $200.' Been there, done that. Super job on this. Have a great weekend, Judy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks Judy it was a rant said too much to Tom about my additions to chapters of my book breached the rules he said so no more additions after chapter 10 :( MIkey told me if I had kept my mouth shut could have continued doing what I was doing the additions were mostly new inspiration anyway not much of the old.

Comment from PatVallesMangan

Excellent

This is very cute and whimsical! I think all of us can relate to that foot-mouth-disease! It was straight and to the point and is a nice piece fir this genre. The picture goes with it quite well!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Yeah I thought so. It was a rant actually had the picture a long time ha. Should keep my mouth firma le buche as they say in France I think. Was having a great time doing breaking up of larger chapters and adding some more but mentioned it to Tom I should NOT have done that. In breach of rules he claims had I not said aything he may not have known. Grrrr.

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Sankey, this resembles a limerick and holds much truth. Taming the tongue is always job number one. Nice touch of humor to swallow the bitter pill of truth. Nicely done. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Yeah mate should have said much less and I could continue the great fun I was having thanks for the review. God Bless.

Comment from Dawny53

Excellent

I love it! So true.. you do need to be careful what you say, and certainly right here. Being honest can be done.. but it sure is hard sometimes! Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Hi dawny not sure we have met before. It weas a rant about being honest to Tom and messing thigs up for something I was really enjoying here. Mikey said if I had shut up Tom would not have known ! Grrrr More details if interested. Thanks for the great review.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

My hubby says I don't put my foot in my mouth ....just that I take it out occasionally...maybe Fred fanstorians will understand this penchant for toe jam..I don't know what it's all about
God bless

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Hi Jenny I confessed to Tom I had been adding more chapters to my book by splitting the old chapters. But as Mikey said it was not that I was repeating everything from the big original chapter I was adding new content in the additional chapters but now I can't do it as Tom said I am in breach of the rules! I was enjoying gettig more pictures up from my life as well!! Bleah! Thanks for coming by.

reply by kiwijenny on 03-Oct-2014

Good to know..some rules are silly

Comment from GWinterwin

Excellent

Very good poem with a true message for some people. Good picture to make it become real. Guess we all have had one of those moments in life.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Yeah thanks now you have seen it I mentioned why I wrote this to you in your other review response thanks.