Behind the Door
a poem in iambic tetrameter121 total reviews
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
Your poems, like this one, often encourage the timid to reach out bravely and try more things. I particularly like this stanza: "Though many long have realized / that answers loom beyond their reach / too often they have failed to see / that questions too have much to teach. Love, Jeanie
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
Your poems, like this one, often encourage the timid to reach out bravely and try more things. I particularly like this stanza: "Though many long have realized / that answers loom beyond their reach / too often they have failed to see / that questions too have much to teach. Love, Jeanie
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Jeanie, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Janet Foor
"Behind the Door" is a thought provoking piece Brooke. Some people live their lives always afraid to open those doors or ask those questions and miss out on a wonderful world.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
"Behind the Door" is a thought provoking piece Brooke. Some people live their lives always afraid to open those doors or ask those questions and miss out on a wonderful world.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Janet, thank you so very much, my generous and thoughtful friend :-) Brooke
Comment from TAB_that's me
question as well as answers do teach. this is a great poem of philosophy brooke. perfect meter. great rhyme and near rhyme.
teresa
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
question as well as answers do teach. this is a great poem of philosophy brooke. perfect meter. great rhyme and near rhyme.
teresa
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Teresa :-) Brooke
Comment from Sarah Butterfly
Fluently written poem with a funny picture joined. Very creative thinking putting this poem and picture together. Nicely done!
Kind regards
Sarah
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
Fluently written poem with a funny picture joined. Very creative thinking putting this poem and picture together. Nicely done!
Kind regards
Sarah
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Sarah, thank you so very much for your generous response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from fastdigits
all your writings have a tonal quality,
an artistic temperament that can not
be replicated by just anyone.
Now in this bit of poetic commentary
you bring to the fore that fear that
most people have of going outside their
circle of comfort and trying the other
side, where you may not always find comfort
or happiness, but if you don't try, you
will never know.
You have poetically written what I
have always strived towards, and now
I can see that goal in poetic fashion.
beautiful.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
all your writings have a tonal quality,
an artistic temperament that can not
be replicated by just anyone.
Now in this bit of poetic commentary
you bring to the fore that fear that
most people have of going outside their
circle of comfort and trying the other
side, where you may not always find comfort
or happiness, but if you don't try, you
will never know.
You have poetically written what I
have always strived towards, and now
I can see that goal in poetic fashion.
beautiful.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, fastdigits, for your thoughtful comments and generous six stars :-) Brooke
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hi Brooke,
I absolutely love that picture! I think it should be framed and hung. Wanna laugh? What came to my mind was that TV where people have to choose a door and gamble on the prize. (I watch that show only when I have a particular visitor here.)
Yes, there is so much in life to explore. Unless we open the doors, we won't know what knowledge we may gain.
Hugs,
Lou
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
Hi Brooke,
I absolutely love that picture! I think it should be framed and hung. Wanna laugh? What came to my mind was that TV where people have to choose a door and gamble on the prize. (I watch that show only when I have a particular visitor here.)
Yes, there is so much in life to explore. Unless we open the doors, we won't know what knowledge we may gain.
Hugs,
Lou
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Lou - so glad you enjoyed :-) Brooke
Comment from Deniz22
Wonderful, thought-provoking poem. As usual, your organization of your thoughts are beautifully dovetailed, making a most appealing assembly. :) Dennis
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
Wonderful, thought-provoking poem. As usual, your organization of your thoughts are beautifully dovetailed, making a most appealing assembly. :) Dennis
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thank you, Dennis, for your generosity and gracious review :-) Brooke
Comment from Genya
We never know what's behind the door. So many questions that could be answered then more questions would come from that. Questions do have much to teach asking the right questions is not always easy either. Loved the picture and a perfect photo shoot for potato. Excellent rhythm and rhyme as always. Great read. Genya
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
We never know what's behind the door. So many questions that could be answered then more questions would come from that. Questions do have much to teach asking the right questions is not always easy either. Loved the picture and a perfect photo shoot for potato. Excellent rhythm and rhyme as always. Great read. Genya
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Genya, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from thee-name
Excellent poem. A nice rhyme to it.
BEHIND THIS DOOR I'VE NEVER BEEN
MAY BE THE QUESTION NEVER ASKED
AND IN THE QUESTION ANSWERS FOUND
TO MYSTERIES PROFOUND AND VAST
Excellent poem. A nice rhyme to it.
BEHIND THIS DOOR I'VE NEVER BEEN
MAY BE THE QUESTION NEVER ASKED
AND IN THE QUESTION ANSWERS FOUND
TO MYSTERIES PROFOUND AND VAST
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
Comment from jaded831
Easy flowing, fun to read, and a great picture to top it off. Finding the answers to some questions opens tho door to more questions that need to be asked. That's why the picture is so fitting.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
Easy flowing, fun to read, and a great picture to top it off. Finding the answers to some questions opens tho door to more questions that need to be asked. That's why the picture is so fitting.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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jaded, thank you so much :-) Brooke