Reality Check
a pep talk in rhyme158 total reviews
Comment from chasennov
a pep talk in rhyme 'Reality Check.' A fabulous way to teach children the correct way of progressing along life's ways. I have a feeling Sawyer has a lifetime of teachings at hand. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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a pep talk in rhyme 'Reality Check.' A fabulous way to teach children the correct way of progressing along life's ways. I have a feeling Sawyer has a lifetime of teachings at hand. Well done.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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chasennov, thank you so much :-) Brooke
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You are most welcome, Brooke.
Comment from nancyjam
I like the message here, Brooke and the
illustration is delightful.
In most cases a goal is reached by hard work
on the part of the individual.
Looks like Sawyer is on his way to achieving great things!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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I like the message here, Brooke and the
illustration is delightful.
In most cases a goal is reached by hard work
on the part of the individual.
Looks like Sawyer is on his way to achieving great things!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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nancy, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Delahay
How true! We have to overcome the obstacles life throws at us on our own. We may get help at times but we can't expect someone else to swoop in and take care of things for us. Cute picture!
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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How true! We have to overcome the obstacles life throws at us on our own. We may get help at times but we can't expect someone else to swoop in and take care of things for us. Cute picture!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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WardHays, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from CR Delport
Wow, look at the Cute Little One go. I am sure that he has a lot of fun on those play things. As usual, this is very well written. Good job.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Wow, look at the Cute Little One go. I am sure that he has a lot of fun on those play things. As usual, this is very well written. Good job.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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CR, thanks so much - yep, he loves to climb and slide and swing and hop... :-) Brooke
Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Cute poem and a great shot of Sawyer making his way to the top. Success comes to those who keep on keepin' on. My bet is he will make it without Superman's help.
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Cute poem and a great shot of Sawyer making his way to the top. Success comes to those who keep on keepin' on. My bet is he will make it without Superman's help.
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Carolyn, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Spitfire
LOL. This is what my lazy high school girls hoped for-- a rich man would set them up for life. The smart ones knew the ladder involved volunteer work and a job history to learn different skills. Well versed.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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LOL. This is what my lazy high school girls hoped for-- a rich man would set them up for life. The smart ones knew the ladder involved volunteer work and a job history to learn different skills. Well versed.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Spitfire - yep, marrying the rich guy is just one of many variants of this way of thinking. A more recent one is the bizarre belief that one is going to win the lottery - I mean, a few people do, but it's hardly a plan, and for many it seems to be their plan A. Brooke :-)
Comment from lancellot
Yes, there are no supermen, just regular folks who have to take their time, pay their dues and learn from each step up whatever ladder life places before them. Great work.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Yes, there are no supermen, just regular folks who have to take their time, pay their dues and learn from each step up whatever ladder life places before them. Great work.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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lancellot, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Dom G Robles
A very descriptive poem. Brooke, I appreciate that your poem has presented. Even without the very descriptive picture, I can see clearly what you were saying. I had seen a lot of kids before trying very hard to reach goal by climbing their way up. They think for a while, struggle, and with the limited knowledge they have as yet. they try every means, sometimes cry and ultimately come up victorious at the end. Even without the picture you provided your poem is keen and self-explanatory. Congratulations. Dom
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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A very descriptive poem. Brooke, I appreciate that your poem has presented. Even without the very descriptive picture, I can see clearly what you were saying. I had seen a lot of kids before trying very hard to reach goal by climbing their way up. They think for a while, struggle, and with the limited knowledge they have as yet. they try every means, sometimes cry and ultimately come up victorious at the end. Even without the picture you provided your poem is keen and self-explanatory. Congratulations. Dom
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Dom :-) Brooke
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You are very welcome, Brooke. Dom
Comment from words
Love this little aphoristic write.
Truer words were never spoken.
I think this instant gratification generation needs some reminding .
Love the photo .
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Love this little aphoristic write.
Truer words were never spoken.
I think this instant gratification generation needs some reminding .
Love the photo .
Hugs, d
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Hi, Diane. Thank you so much, my friend, for the lovely stars :-) Brooke
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hey, Brooke...
I love this! So right - it takes as long as it takes, one rung at at time.
I can almost hear little Sawyer's mind churning in contemplation about getting to the top.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Hey, Brooke...
I love this! So right - it takes as long as it takes, one rung at at time.
I can almost hear little Sawyer's mind churning in contemplation about getting to the top.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Jax :-) Brooke
