Reality Check
a pep talk in rhyme158 total reviews
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brooke,
What cute pictures of Sawyer. It looks like he's having fun climbing. Your poem is great, like always. I had fun looking at him having fun and reading your wonderful work.
Kat
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Hi Brooke,
What cute pictures of Sawyer. It looks like he's having fun climbing. Your poem is great, like always. I had fun looking at him having fun and reading your wonderful work.
Kat
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Kat :-) Brooke
Comment from scraps30
I really liked this little poem, adewpearl. I have to remind my own daughter to take one literal step at a time (she has spina bifida), and also to be patient at whatever it is you're trying to do in life.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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I really liked this little poem, adewpearl. I have to remind my own daughter to take one literal step at a time (she has spina bifida), and also to be patient at whatever it is you're trying to do in life.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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scraps, thank you for your review and for sharing this with me - I am always gratified when something I write has meaning on a personal level for a reader :-) Brooke
Comment from mshirachot
Brooke! Cute! Like the alliteration with Superman and swoopin', ticket and top.
It is short but very sweet! Great message of encouragement.
hugs and blessings,
Marsha
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Brooke! Cute! Like the alliteration with Superman and swoopin', ticket and top.
It is short but very sweet! Great message of encouragement.
hugs and blessings,
Marsha
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Marsha, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from jaded831
I love it, such a fun way to pass along good advice. Appealing to young and old. Short and sweet and to the point. It looks like superman was not needed Sawyer is doing fine on his own.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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I love it, such a fun way to pass along good advice. Appealing to young and old. Short and sweet and to the point. It looks like superman was not needed Sawyer is doing fine on his own.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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jaded, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Halfree
Very nicely done.. The photo helps the poem but the poem stands on its own without the photo. I know FS wants a long sort-of review. Here is my long drawn out review: good writing, well presented and nice to read. OK?
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Very nicely done.. The photo helps the poem but the poem stands on its own without the photo. I know FS wants a long sort-of review. Here is my long drawn out review: good writing, well presented and nice to read. OK?
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Halfree, thanks so much :-) You've left me smiling. Brooke
Comment from rjuselius
Indeed getting to the top is a slow process and a demanding one. No one can get up a high if the rungs are oiled, the drop down however is a quick one.
thank you for sharing this philosophical piece!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Indeed getting to the top is a slow process and a demanding one. No one can get up a high if the rungs are oiled, the drop down however is a quick one.
thank you for sharing this philosophical piece!
rebekka x
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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rebekka, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from JMRoland
Hi adewpearl(Brooke),
This short, witty, rhymed poem qualifies as a wise and instructive epigram. Cute photo of Sawyer completes the work to perfection. Nicely done.
JMR
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Hi adewpearl(Brooke),
This short, witty, rhymed poem qualifies as a wise and instructive epigram. Cute photo of Sawyer completes the work to perfection. Nicely done.
JMR
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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JMR, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from thee-name
Nice description of climbing. Hope he don't fall.
SUPERMAN AIN'T SWOOPIN' IN
TO HELP YOU ON YOUR CLIMB
THE ONLY TICKET TO THE TOP
COMES ONE RUNG AT A TIME
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Nice description of climbing. Hope he don't fall.
SUPERMAN AIN'T SWOOPIN' IN
TO HELP YOU ON YOUR CLIMB
THE ONLY TICKET TO THE TOP
COMES ONE RUNG AT A TIME
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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thee-name, thanks so much :-) Brooke
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THANK YOU!
Comment from livelylinda
Brooke: words of wisdom written briefly in a fun rhyme. Made me stop to think of all the places with which this could apply: baby's first steps, learning the alphabet one letter at a time, climbing up the corporate ladder, one ring at a time as trees grow. The thoughts were endless. Thanks once again for such entertaining and life pertaining poetry. Linda
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Brooke: words of wisdom written briefly in a fun rhyme. Made me stop to think of all the places with which this could apply: baby's first steps, learning the alphabet one letter at a time, climbing up the corporate ladder, one ring at a time as trees grow. The thoughts were endless. Thanks once again for such entertaining and life pertaining poetry. Linda
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Linda, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Joan E.
I always enjoy your little lessons in these rhymed pieces. Of course, a photograph of Sawyer's energized, parallel actions help! Many cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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I always enjoy your little lessons in these rhymed pieces. Of course, a photograph of Sawyer's energized, parallel actions help! Many cheers- Joan
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Joan, thanks so much :-) Brooke
