Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Amazing what you write about from all the different photos of Sawyer. As you say a pep talk in rhyme, a life lesson in verse. Nicely done Brooke.

valda

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Pearl, thanks so much :-) Brooke

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

You got that right! Superman is about as reliable
as all the other superheroes people place their
trust in. My, I'm a bit cynical this morning.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Lee, thank you, my friend :-) Cynical is a very easy point of view to have any more. Brooke

Comment from heyjude

Excellent

Brooke, isn't that the truth. Superman's not going to
help any of us like that. We have to work and do it
ourselves. I like your pep talk. I like the Superman...
swoopin...

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

heyjude, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

Yes, to move forward one must look through faithful eyes, praying but placing one foot in front of the other "prayer without works..."od bless

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

thank you for your thoughtful review, ronnie :-) Brooke

Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

Excellent

Absolutely, couldn't agree more, one rung at a time... Sure and steady wins the race. When I was trying to educate my young mothers to take care of their babies I used to urge them to keep in mind the end result. Sometimes it worked! And that gave me great joy, Giddy

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Thanks so much, Giddy :-) Brooke

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Brook, a short poem with a profound message, One step at a time was quoted by Confucius. Baby steps by the psychologists, Well written with a great pic of Sawyer taken one rung at a time.

Mary

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

Comment from Aussie

Excellent

Heh, Heh, like this pep talk that could apply to all ages. I find if you want it done, do it yourself and that way you know its done properly - can't climb ladders though. Miranda must have 1.000 photos by now! Nicely written my friend.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Kay, thank you. Yes, I personally know some adults who are also still waiting for Superman to come rescue them from their problems :-) And yes, Miranda has so many photos she occasionally has to erase some near duplicates from her computer to have storage room :-) Brooke

Comment from fayesh

Excellent

Brooke, this is a lovely little piece of poetry depicting Sawyer's attempt to climb to the top. The rhymes are perfect. The lesson of fending for one's self is excellent.
Take care, Faye

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2014

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014

Faye, how nice to hear from you :-) Thanks so much, my friend. Brooke

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I have a dear friend who gives me pep talks all the time. I appreciate them so much because I live alone and I need someone to talk to. I love the photo with this one.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014

Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

To adewpearl,
Very suggestive measures are needed to get him where he is going or what he is after without breaking his neck.
Nice flow and imagery.
Charlene

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2014