Reality Check
a pep talk in rhyme158 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
This is very cute and teaches a lesson. One step at a time gets you there.I want to congratulate you on the ABAB contest win,,, great job. The rhyme and rhythm of your poems are always perfect.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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This is very cute and teaches a lesson. One step at a time gets you there.I want to congratulate you on the ABAB contest win,,, great job. The rhyme and rhythm of your poems are always perfect.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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RYME4U, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Sasha
This is beyond awesome. What wonderful advice for both adults and children. Something I wish I had been told when I was a child. Great work with this one. I enjoyed it immensely.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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This is beyond awesome. What wonderful advice for both adults and children. Something I wish I had been told when I was a child. Great work with this one. I enjoyed it immensely.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thank you so much, Valerie, for your generous review. I know some people still waiting for Superman to show up to achieve their goals for them. How sad. Brooke
Comment from krys123
Brooke;
A positive pep talk in a well rhymed verse with a picture represents and complements the poem very well.
Your imagination and this is truly inventive and ingeniously creative. Are you match the picture with the writing or the writing with the picture, however, it may be.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the good Lord be with you always, Brooke.
Alex
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Brooke;
A positive pep talk in a well rhymed verse with a picture represents and complements the poem very well.
Your imagination and this is truly inventive and ingeniously creative. Are you match the picture with the writing or the writing with the picture, however, it may be.
Thank you so much for sharing and posting this for everyone to read and may the good Lord be with you always, Brooke.
Alex
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
Comment from Dustybones
Adorable. I see you have the best life with your family. Me too, I have no children, but my soon to be bride has a great family.
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Adorable. I see you have the best life with your family. Me too, I have no children, but my soon to be bride has a great family.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
Comment from c_lucas
Climbing one rung at a time will get you there, eventually. There's got to be a better, faster way! This is very well written with a smoth flow of words, making for a good read.
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Climbing one rung at a time will get you there, eventually. There's got to be a better, faster way! This is very well written with a smoth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
Comment from kiwisteveh
Some folk are born with pre-made wings
to get 'em to the top.
I tried out for a pair; alas,
they ere a bloody flop!
Cute.
Steve
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Some folk are born with pre-made wings
to get 'em to the top.
I tried out for a pair; alas,
they ere a bloody flop!
Cute.
Steve
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
Comment from kiwijenny
Perfect advice with the perfect picture to match
I love this approach to life ...one rung at a time
Miranda gets Sawyer doing wonderfully educational things...she is a smart mother
God bless
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Perfect advice with the perfect picture to match
I love this approach to life ...one rung at a time
Miranda gets Sawyer doing wonderfully educational things...she is a smart mother
God bless
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
Comment from Glasstruth
How true. It's step by step, and it's all up to you. Yet, we're always looking for something extra special. Has a smooth flow. Reads well. Nice philosophy. A great pep talk. Les
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How true. It's step by step, and it's all up to you. Yet, we're always looking for something extra special. Has a smooth flow. Reads well. Nice philosophy. A great pep talk. Les
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
Comment from jackpeg
I would have chosen Spiderman for this little pep talk. Superman doesn't climb, he flies. But that's a small matter. Little Sawyer doesn't look quite ready to handle Octoman just yet. Nifty little couplet, though. Lotsa hits coming, I bet.
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I would have chosen Spiderman for this little pep talk. Superman doesn't climb, he flies. But that's a small matter. Little Sawyer doesn't look quite ready to handle Octoman just yet. Nifty little couplet, though. Lotsa hits coming, I bet.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
Comment from TAB_that's me
the road to the top is a lonely one:) there's no satisfaction if he doesn't do it by himself. fun poem brooke.
teresa
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the road to the top is a lonely one:) there's no satisfaction if he doesn't do it by himself. fun poem brooke.
teresa
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
