Reality Check
a pep talk in rhyme158 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Brooke, if that little sweetheart fell...Miranda would be there by the time he hit the bottom...LOL...he is all over the place...but happy...love your poem...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
HI Brooke, if that little sweetheart fell...Miranda would be there by the time he hit the bottom...LOL...he is all over the place...but happy...love your poem...very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Linda, thanks so much :-) Yep, she is not a hoverer, but she sure is a protector if things come to that :-) Brooke
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I'm sure...You are so welcome Brooke...luff
Comment from skye
Superman ain't swoopin' in
to help you on your climb --
The only ticket to the top
comes one rung at a time.
Encouraging and fun, the reference to Superman makes it appealing to kids of all ages. Great advice.
Well done.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
Superman ain't swoopin' in
to help you on your climb --
The only ticket to the top
comes one rung at a time.
Encouraging and fun, the reference to Superman makes it appealing to kids of all ages. Great advice.
Well done.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Thanks so much, Skye :-) Brooke
Comment from Linda England Bonam
This is so cute, Brooke!
Loved the poem and the picture! I know you are
enjoying this little guy! 'Only ticket to the top
comes one rung at a time!' (great line!)
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
This is so cute, Brooke!
Loved the poem and the picture! I know you are
enjoying this little guy! 'Only ticket to the top
comes one rung at a time!' (great line!)
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Curly Girly
Another fun verse with pearls of wisdom for life on earth. It's hard getting to the top, and we all have to start at the bottom -- and usually nobody saves us when we fall.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
Another fun verse with pearls of wisdom for life on earth. It's hard getting to the top, and we all have to start at the bottom -- and usually nobody saves us when we fall.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Curly Girly, thanks so much :-) Brooke
Comment from Drew Delaney
Short but sweet. Everyone should learn that lesson. One rung at a time. My mother always said, One Step at a Time. So in this poem, I really like the one rung as a time to reach the top. Great metaphor used here.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
Short but sweet. Everyone should learn that lesson. One rung at a time. My mother always said, One Step at a Time. So in this poem, I really like the one rung as a time to reach the top. Great metaphor used here.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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Drew, thank you so much :-) Brooke
Comment from acerisestory
A perfect picture of Sawyer, Brooke, to accompany your thoughtful words about working one's way up.
Great alliteration with Superman and swoopin' (I like the missing g) and ticket to the top.
Thank you for sharing, Brooke! Take care. Alana
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
A perfect picture of Sawyer, Brooke, to accompany your thoughtful words about working one's way up.
Great alliteration with Superman and swoopin' (I like the missing g) and ticket to the top.
Thank you for sharing, Brooke! Take care. Alana
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Alana, so glad you enjoyed - thank you :-) Brooke
Comment from GeraldS
Nice. Simple. Understandable. This is true, the only way they really learn and gain true confidence is by doing things themselves ... when they are ready. Nice observation.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
Nice. Simple. Understandable. This is true, the only way they really learn and gain true confidence is by doing things themselves ... when they are ready. Nice observation.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Gerald, thank you so very much :-) Brooke
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is sooo cute, brooke. Don't look to me for help. climb that ladder by yourself and hang on tight. you can really do it. it might take all night. but i'll be there to encourage you until you make it to the top. do it on your own power and you just can't be stopped.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
this is sooo cute, brooke. Don't look to me for help. climb that ladder by yourself and hang on tight. you can really do it. it might take all night. but i'll be there to encourage you until you make it to the top. do it on your own power and you just can't be stopped.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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sweetwoodjax, thank you so much :-) My daughter and her husband raise Sawyer that way - no helicopter parenting - lots of encouragement that he can do it :-) Brooke
Comment from tdragonfly
A pep talk for all of us. We have to climb the ladder of life and everyday issues one rung at a time. Somehow it is cuter with the little one. The rhyme says a lot in very few words.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
A pep talk for all of us. We have to climb the ladder of life and everyday issues one rung at a time. Somehow it is cuter with the little one. The rhyme says a lot in very few words.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2014
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thanks so much, tdragonfly :-) Brooke
Comment from Janet Foor
Great poem Brooke and great advice for all of us. One rung at a time is the only way to the top. What a playful picture to capture your encouraging words.
Janet
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
Great poem Brooke and great advice for all of us. One rung at a time is the only way to the top. What a playful picture to capture your encouraging words.
Janet
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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Janet, thank you so much :-) Brooke