Man In Hold
Doubt and reality mix to create3 total reviews
Comment from honeytree
The art work is great for the words written.
It is a long poem and so much has been said
within the words are interesting.
We must remember our lives can be a mixture
of many things that we see, feel and hear on earth.
Doubt, hate, confusion, love and many other human traits
will always be.
honey tree
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The art work is great for the words written.
It is a long poem and so much has been said
within the words are interesting.
We must remember our lives can be a mixture
of many things that we see, feel and hear on earth.
Doubt, hate, confusion, love and many other human traits
will always be.
honey tree
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
The son does not fall too far from the tree. This doesn't seem to have been written that long ago. I thought at first the son you referenced was your own blood son, not Jesus Christ.
There are elements of both and throw in a little evolution as well.
I like this. And, if I read it a dozen times more I would probably understand MORE than half of it.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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The son does not fall too far from the tree. This doesn't seem to have been written that long ago. I thought at first the son you referenced was your own blood son, not Jesus Christ.
There are elements of both and throw in a little evolution as well.
I like this. And, if I read it a dozen times more I would probably understand MORE than half of it.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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You have eyes that see & ears that hear, thank you again for time spent, please have the best day you can, looking forward to the next write..Walt
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Look no farther. It's here!
Comment from James Dooney
Hmm I must say that I do quite like this one. Its like it is disjointed but held together. It all works in the end. Great work !
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Hmm I must say that I do quite like this one. Its like it is disjointed but held together. It all works in the end. Great work !
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
