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We'll light...

For dear Maureen.

110 total reviews 
Comment from INtity
Exceptional
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A fascinating poem, well rhymed and written. The first and last stanza is awesome! The last four lines make this a six star poem!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you for this most wonderful review, comments, and stars, and for the tribute to Maureen, blessings, Roy.
Comment from skye
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Beautiful poem for a beautiful soul. I love the feeling of hope and beauty, the prayer to allow her to stay, to keep lifting us up with her spirit.
Excellent poem. So well written, with huge emotional appeal.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you Skye for responding and supporting Maureen, and me, great review, blessings, Roy.
Comment from nancyjam
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This is a lovely tribute to Maureen.
The sentiment is expressed beautifully with
great rhyme and meter.
she is certainly needed in this world as
she brings love and light.
She is in my prayers. Nancy

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you I'm sure Maureen would enjoy your response, Nancy, as do I, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Linda England Bonam
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This is a very beautiful piece that you wrote for Maureen Napier. She is a lovely person, and excellent poet. I know people on this site have been pouring out their hearts with poems for her, or about her, and I know her family must appreciate that very much!

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you Linda, we can add your voice to kind words and tribute, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Emily George
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A beautiful tribute in this poem of dedication to Maureen I join you in wishes for he good health.
I will light a candle for her.
Beautifully written with that calming and uplifting scene to focus on

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you Emily, your added voice to well wishers and candle holders is appreciated, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Janet Foor
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A lovely poem for our friend Maureen. Beautiful picture reminding me of her Bon Echo lake she loves so much. Great sentiment, lovely rhyme. Well done as we continue to pray for her health to return.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you for joining those that are praying for Maureen, must be deafening in heaven right, now, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Ben Colder
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She was very inspirational to me with her poetry. I will agree in prayer with you. I remember when first trying to get a video to post. She was so helpful in teaching me how.
Well doe, poet. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you bro, we must have a lot of incense in the nostrils of God at the moment, blessings bro, Roy
Comment from acerisestory
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This is a beautiful and heartfelt to Maureen, Roy. Your words are so very descriptive. They brought tears to my eyes, and although I don't know Maureen, she is well loved here on Fanstory. The third stanza is particularly moving:

So fire a beacon on the hill,
A lighthouse on the rock,
A candle on your windowsill,
A set against time's clock.

This poem is well worth one of my coveted sixes. Thank you for sharing, Roy.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you so much Alana, I appreciate.the review and stars but mostly concern for Maureen, blessings, Roy.
reply by acerisestory on 01-Oct-2014
    You are welcome, Roy!
Comment from Honeysuckle1876
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What an exceptional piece of work. I love Maureen and her writing. This is a wonderful tribute to a wonderful much loved a women. Your poem was written perfect. A truly 6 star piece of work. Prayers go out to Maureen and her family.

Honeysuckle1876

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you so much for this wonderful response and tribute for Maureen, the very generous stars I appreciate also, blessings, Roy.
Comment from Genya
Exceptional
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A beautifully written tribute to a friend who is so in need as l read your poem. So much feeling, love and care through every word you have written. Loved the last stanza and it brought tears to my eyes. So fire a beacon on the hill, a lighthouse on the rock, a candle on the windowsill. So beautiful and visual in every word. Genya

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2014


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
    Thank you Genya for the wonderful tribute for my poetic attempt to honour Maureen, your stars are most appreciated, more than that your the focal of this poem, my heartfelt blessings, Roy.