Her First Christmas Doll
Struggle to have a baby and finally on Christmas Day5 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I .love the artwork you choose for your write it's so cheerful and bright. I hope the story was the same. In the end everyone was happy.
I call, my heart doctor Santa Clause. LOL.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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I .love the artwork you choose for your write it's so cheerful and bright. I hope the story was the same. In the end everyone was happy.
I call, my heart doctor Santa Clause. LOL.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2014
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It is always a blessing for me to know others are touched by my writing. Most things I write are coming from my heart,usually about a true experience in my own life. Having been alive for 76 years I have a lot of experience to draw from. The art was a piece
of art I did using my computer to create it.
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You 're very welcome, Wow do you have lots od talent.
have a nice Oct first.
Cookie
Comment from Keith Argyle
This is a beautiful story and I'm glad everything went well eventually. I know of someone who desperately wanted children and it never happened for them, but they are to this day blissfully happy and still madly in love, Jim is 70 and Sally is in her late sixties. It's wonderful to hear stories that end happily as some often don't. Nice story and well written. I like the picture too. Well done, Keith.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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This is a beautiful story and I'm glad everything went well eventually. I know of someone who desperately wanted children and it never happened for them, but they are to this day blissfully happy and still madly in love, Jim is 70 and Sally is in her late sixties. It's wonderful to hear stories that end happily as some often don't. Nice story and well written. I like the picture too. Well done, Keith.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thanks. it is a blessing always to be friends who are in happy life long marriages. I am sorry their dream of having children never happened for them.
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Yes, it is sad, but they compensate with several dogs and a horse. Thanks for your words. Keith. :)
Comment from rmj09
This story fits the genre of biographical fiction.
The focus was having a baby, while the development had the baby arrive on Christmas day. A gift from God on his sons birthday.
The dialogue told the emotion and story, while the narrative told of the action.
..."Honey you are so special and I never (chg wanted to want) you to forget that.
...a child she grew more and more excited about the (chg birt to birth)...
...feet up on suitcases to help reduce the (s attach welling together)
Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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This story fits the genre of biographical fiction.
The focus was having a baby, while the development had the baby arrive on Christmas day. A gift from God on his sons birthday.
The dialogue told the emotion and story, while the narrative told of the action.
..."Honey you are so special and I never (chg wanted to want) you to forget that.
...a child she grew more and more excited about the (chg birt to birth)...
...feet up on suitcases to help reduce the (s attach welling together)
Keep on writing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the lovely review. The birth of this baby on His son's birthday holds a special meaning to me. One day I will write that story and the meaning it has.
My life story was made into a radio drama. The drama starts airing on Sunday Oct 5th (part1) and Oct 12 ( part 2 ) at this link
www.oneplace.com/ministries/unshackled
Comment from Caressa_08
A story that showed a lot of strength's & optimism with 3 miscarriages & a wonderful, happy ending, & so interesting that your doctor with that name seemed like a Santa Claus with a baby daughter he delivered to you & your husband, what a joyous Christmas Day that must of been & such a wonderful present! I had just one miscarriage & can sympathize with you, & my daughter was born on January 1st & my twin sons birthday is today Sept. 30th...All grown, hope to write a poem soon about my three, & my love for them, hopefully soon...Thanks so much for sharing, Pat.
Caressa
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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A story that showed a lot of strength's & optimism with 3 miscarriages & a wonderful, happy ending, & so interesting that your doctor with that name seemed like a Santa Claus with a baby daughter he delivered to you & your husband, what a joyous Christmas Day that must of been & such a wonderful present! I had just one miscarriage & can sympathize with you, & my daughter was born on January 1st & my twin sons birthday is today Sept. 30th...All grown, hope to write a poem soon about my three, & my love for them, hopefully soon...Thanks so much for sharing, Pat.
Caressa
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you for you review. and happy birthday to your twin sons. I happen to be a twin. I have a twin brother, so when I see the word twins, it grabs my attention. Yes, the Christmas of my darling Penny was without a doubt the best Christmas of my life and she is such a lovely lady today. A PA and a ballroom dancer. Since I had a second bag of water before her birth as is in the story, doctor think I might have been pregnant with twins, but the second twin never developed. I will know when I get to Heaven I suppose, but for now I just praise God for the beautiful children he blessed me with.
Comment from GracieAnn
pat, this is a well written piece that shares the sorrows and joys of bearing children or losing them. Powerful emotions are well depicted here. Nice work. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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pat, this is a well written piece that shares the sorrows and joys of bearing children or losing them. Powerful emotions are well depicted here. Nice work. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you GracieAnn. Your words of encouragement mean a lot to me my friend.
