Birds of a Feather
Love poem at 50 plus30 total reviews
Comment from Pili Pubul
Is no age for love, I enjoy the wonderful metaphores you created.
Love the style , images and word choice," the seductive wine ". LOL.
Good luck in the contest. Good entrance. Pili
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Is no age for love, I enjoy the wonderful metaphores you created.
Love the style , images and word choice," the seductive wine ". LOL.
Good luck in the contest. Good entrance. Pili
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you for your inspirational words, dear Pili.
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You are very welcome... Hugs. Pili
Comment from Nosha17
Yes, life does not have to finish as we age. Good use of metaphorical language and rhyming to convey your thoughts. Great picture and enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Yes, life does not have to finish as we age. Good use of metaphorical language and rhyming to convey your thoughts. Great picture and enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you Faye for reading and liking these lines.
Comment from robina1978
Lovely photo of two birds/people that are in love. I thought it is no specific form. You described older, more mature love. Original idea for the contest. Best wishes for it.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Lovely photo of two birds/people that are in love. I thought it is no specific form. You described older, more mature love. Original idea for the contest. Best wishes for it.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you, Ine.
Comment from jaeladarling
Awesome poem, full of excitement and romance. Love the poetic form - makes for a good read. :) Awesome work. Thanks so much for sharing!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Awesome poem, full of excitement and romance. Love the poetic form - makes for a good read. :) Awesome work. Thanks so much for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you for reading my work.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Amara,
I like this twist on love for 50 plus. Great job of simply getting the message across we aren't dead. Like fine wine, we just get better with age!!
The best of luck in the contest
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Hi Amara,
I like this twist on love for 50 plus. Great job of simply getting the message across we aren't dead. Like fine wine, we just get better with age!!
The best of luck in the contest
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you for reading my work and for the smiles...
Comment from vapros
At fifty plus, the farthest shore is here, indeed. You have composed an entertaining poem about the attractions that have endured. Well done.
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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At fifty plus, the farthest shore is here, indeed. You have composed an entertaining poem about the attractions that have endured. Well done.
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Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you for your lovely comments.
Comment from Cajungirl
Excellent love poem contest entry. Love at fifty or sixty can be just as much fun as first love at fifteen or sixteen. Very enjoyable poem. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Excellent love poem contest entry. Love at fifty or sixty can be just as much fun as first love at fifteen or sixteen. Very enjoyable poem. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you for reading my work and for the best wishes. Delightful!
Comment from Leigh Ann
I love the form; it's like one lone sentence. The compassion and passion are spoken loudly thoughout this piece. Great unique entry for the love poem contest. Good luck. This is excellent.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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I love the form; it's like one lone sentence. The compassion and passion are spoken loudly thoughout this piece. Great unique entry for the love poem contest. Good luck. This is excellent.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for the great comments and inspirational words.
Comment from rmj09
This poem meets the requirements of a love poem.
It meets the genre of a romance poem.
The focus is on love, while the development shows all the paths to love.
The narrative shows the paths to love.
Good luck with the contest.
Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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This poem meets the requirements of a love poem.
It meets the genre of a romance poem.
The focus is on love, while the development shows all the paths to love.
The narrative shows the paths to love.
Good luck with the contest.
Keep on writing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you for reading my work and for the great comments.
Comment from country ranch writer
Love is a many splendid thing and if you are ready to commit to each other for the have and to hold till this day after till death do us part. then it just might last those 50 glorious years. will be 49 for me this October 15th
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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Love is a many splendid thing and if you are ready to commit to each other for the have and to hold till this day after till death do us part. then it just might last those 50 glorious years. will be 49 for me this October 15th
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014
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Thank you for comenting in this special kind of love. Lovely, isn't it?
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It sure is
