Comment from Dave Russell

Excellent

This was refreshingly different than the usual love contest entries. I loved the different perspective and the melding of your words. Very nicely done

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014

Thank you so much for a meaningful comment. Pili

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

this is a beautiful love poem! how lost love can stay in your heart as kingdom comes. losing a love doesn't mean you won't gain it back again but why should you? just throw yourself in distant waters.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x

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 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014

Thank you my friend , great review. Pili