Love Binds
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Comment from varialette
This small piece has really effective, beautiful imagery that symbolizes love and loss really well. The last line is stunning. Lovely entry.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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This small piece has really effective, beautiful imagery that symbolizes love and loss really well. The last line is stunning. Lovely entry.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much for a great comment. Pili
Comment from Christine B.
When love turns old and slowly turns its head, we are left forever claimed by what once was. This tells it like the long-ago discovery it is, Pili Pubul.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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When love turns old and slowly turns its head, we are left forever claimed by what once was. This tells it like the long-ago discovery it is, Pili Pubul.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Interesting comment, thank you so much. Pili
Comment from Nosha17
Certain situations and love of the things around us can increase our emotions and feelings of love. In this world of evil, we need as much love as we can get. Well chosen words and imagery to convey your thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Faye
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Certain situations and love of the things around us can increase our emotions and feelings of love. In this world of evil, we need as much love as we can get. Well chosen words and imagery to convey your thoughts. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Terrific comment, thank you so much. Pili
Comment from Domino 2
Excellent terse free verse without loads of boring 'bla bla' padding, Pili, to express occasions we're reminded of a special love.
Some excellent subtle alliteration in this sweet write.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Excellent terse free verse without loads of boring 'bla bla' padding, Pili, to express occasions we're reminded of a special love.
Some excellent subtle alliteration in this sweet write.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Thank you my friend for a terrific comment. Pili
Comment from amada
Excellent love poem, dear Pili. I just love plain, good love songs, they can tell the fairies stories, don't they. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Excellent love poem, dear Pili. I just love plain, good love songs, they can tell the fairies stories, don't they. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Thank you so much Amada, great comment. Pili
Comment from fastdigits
A beautifully scripted tale
of the remembrances of love
that will never die, artistically
choreographed in a dance of
emotional feelings that bind
lovers who are more than just
friends forever.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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A beautifully scripted tale
of the remembrances of love
that will never die, artistically
choreographed in a dance of
emotional feelings that bind
lovers who are more than just
friends forever.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Wow, you humble me my friend , thank you so very much for a meaningful comment and high rate. Pili
Comment from Dawny53
I thought this poem was captivating, and quite good, I had a bit of trouble understanding sights spread gently.. if you ever have a moment to spare perhaps you can tell me. Thanks for sharing, it's a good entry
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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I thought this poem was captivating, and quite good, I had a bit of trouble understanding sights spread gently.. if you ever have a moment to spare perhaps you can tell me. Thanks for sharing, it's a good entry
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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In life with somebody , once in a while is a sigh... Thank you for a great comment.
Pili
Comment from TamzinWhite
The picture sets the mood and the words confirm the picture.
I feel like you are describing my long life and relationship of 28 years with my husband.
We are tired and worn, a little dazed, sometimes sad, but happy for the life we've made.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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The picture sets the mood and the words confirm the picture.
I feel like you are describing my long life and relationship of 28 years with my husband.
We are tired and worn, a little dazed, sometimes sad, but happy for the life we've made.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Thank you Tamzing, you capture so well the meaning. Pili
Comment from kiwijenny
Love binds us
Like gravity
Forever.....love this imagery
Well versed...Pili has your elevator been fixed yet? I hope so
Well versed poem
God bless
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Love binds us
Like gravity
Forever.....love this imagery
Well versed...Pili has your elevator been fixed yet? I hope so
Well versed poem
God bless
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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They are working at least.... Let's hope. Thank you for your terrific comment. Pili
Comment from Eric1
Pili my friend, you have broken my heart with your beautiful words, this free verse poem is just wonderful for this competition and is in a different style to those I have reviewed to date, lots of good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Pili my friend, you have broken my heart with your beautiful words, this free verse poem is just wonderful for this competition and is in a different style to those I have reviewed to date, lots of good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2014
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Thank you Eric for your support and terrific review. Pilipubul. ( is fantasy , don't brake your heart LOL. )
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Lol, pili, you made me laugh! Hugs my friend
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I am so glad..
