Texas Dream Catcher
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "CHAPTER SIETE; PART DOS"Drug & human trafficking, can romance win?
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Comment from Sankey
The post is fine like all your stories and chapters are. Thanks again for an interesting read. I hope Jim and Soni get it together if he is not a crook or something. Love the drama and excitement and no spags. I appreciate you and Mikey giving me ideas on how to split up my chapters. As I said to someone earlier, the good thing is more pictures of mine ha!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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The post is fine like all your stories and chapters are. Thanks again for an interesting read. I hope Jim and Soni get it together if he is not a crook or something. Love the drama and excitement and no spags. I appreciate you and Mikey giving me ideas on how to split up my chapters. As I said to someone earlier, the good thing is more pictures of mine ha!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2014
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Thank you.
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Hey had the good ideas for splitting the chapters then said too much to Tom! Alas they are no more!! :(
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Barb,
With the letter, it is pretty much in the open now. However, if she doesn't say anything, it could get ugly.
~~ Did you really mean 40,000 to 10,000 years??
Theory has it anywhere from 40,000 to 10,000 years ago they crossed over
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Hi Barb,
With the letter, it is pretty much in the open now. However, if she doesn't say anything, it could get ugly.
~~ Did you really mean 40,000 to 10,000 years??
Theory has it anywhere from 40,000 to 10,000 years ago they crossed over
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Yes, I did, but I wrote it backwards I need to change it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mumsyone
Good chapter, Barbara, and a great picture of the bison.
Predawn lit (the?) eastern sky before Soni and Alex returned home.
We'll get a few hours sleep,(no comma) and then go back,(no comma) and see if we can find anything."
"It seems fire spooked all the herds,(no comma) but was put out before anyone showed up."
Soni slapped her cowgirl hat against her thigh and watch (watched) the dust rise, before stepping inside.
"At each location(,) brush had been recently burned.
40,000 (4,000?) to 10,000 years ago
"Good(,) and thank you."
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Good chapter, Barbara, and a great picture of the bison.
Predawn lit (the?) eastern sky before Soni and Alex returned home.
We'll get a few hours sleep,(no comma) and then go back,(no comma) and see if we can find anything."
"It seems fire spooked all the herds,(no comma) but was put out before anyone showed up."
Soni slapped her cowgirl hat against her thigh and watch (watched) the dust rise, before stepping inside.
"At each location(,) brush had been recently burned.
40,000 (4,000?) to 10,000 years ago
"Good(,) and thank you."
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you for your helpful review. I will make the changes.
Comment from Jay Squires
If things don't stop happening to rile Soni, she and Jim are never going to hit it off. She always holds the possibility he's implicated. Nothing is a coincidence!
And, now the unaddressed, unstamped, threatening letter to her.
Good chapter, Barbara. No SPAG that I could discover.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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If things don't stop happening to rile Soni, she and Jim are never going to hit it off. She always holds the possibility he's implicated. Nothing is a coincidence!
And, now the unaddressed, unstamped, threatening letter to her.
Good chapter, Barbara. No SPAG that I could discover.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the kind review. I agree. Life isn't going to well for Soni.
Comment from Genya
Nice cliff hanger at the end of this. May she should have told Alex or her grandfather. Another well scripted chapter with a good opening about the cattle stampede. Fire, man. No doubt well soon find out. Also who wrote the letter. I have my thoughts on this. Great read, ready for the next one. Genya
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Nice cliff hanger at the end of this. May she should have told Alex or her grandfather. Another well scripted chapter with a good opening about the cattle stampede. Fire, man. No doubt well soon find out. Also who wrote the letter. I have my thoughts on this. Great read, ready for the next one. Genya
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from angelface2
Good chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it and the explanation of difference in buffalo and bison. I did not know this. :>D Miss Sally
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Good chapter, Barbara. I enjoyed reading it and the explanation of difference in buffalo and bison. I did not know this. :>D Miss Sally
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from PatVallesMangan
This chapter uses very effective dialogue to update even a new reader to the situation. One knows that something is about to happen. The threatening letter that she keeps to herself is a powerful chapter ending which makes the reader want to read the whole book. Nice work!
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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This chapter uses very effective dialogue to update even a new reader to the situation. One knows that something is about to happen. The threatening letter that she keeps to herself is a powerful chapter ending which makes the reader want to read the whole book. Nice work!
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from maggieadams
This was my first chapter and I was not confused because you added enough context....I really enjoyed the distinction between buffalo and bison....I found only one error....Soni sat beside Tatiana, not set. I look forward to your next post.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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This was my first chapter and I was not confused because you added enough context....I really enjoyed the distinction between buffalo and bison....I found only one error....Soni sat beside Tatiana, not set. I look forward to your next post.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent chapter, Barbara, and with an educational side to it as you gave the history of the American buffalo and the differences in other buffalo. then soni hides a threatening letter to leave or else.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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this is an excellent chapter, Barbara, and with an educational side to it as you gave the history of the American buffalo and the differences in other buffalo. then soni hides a threatening letter to leave or else.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from judiverse
This is really great! Soni has all kinds of challenges but is able to meet them. It's quickly determined that the livestock stampede was caused by humans. Interesting bit about the distinction between buffalo and bison. Adds authenticity to the story. Soni hopes that none of her employees is responsible for the stampede, but they seem loyal. Jim asks a lot of questions, but they seem questions that anyone would ask. The letter Soni receives suggests more trouble--a warning to sell the ranch and get out. Will Soni get the police involved or try to figure out on her own who's respoinsible for the anonymous letter? judi
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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This is really great! Soni has all kinds of challenges but is able to meet them. It's quickly determined that the livestock stampede was caused by humans. Interesting bit about the distinction between buffalo and bison. Adds authenticity to the story. Soni hopes that none of her employees is responsible for the stampede, but they seem loyal. Jim asks a lot of questions, but they seem questions that anyone would ask. The letter Soni receives suggests more trouble--a warning to sell the ranch and get out. Will Soni get the police involved or try to figure out on her own who's respoinsible for the anonymous letter? judi
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
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You're very welcome. This is always a great story to read. Great character in Soni. judi
