Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Sound like we both have a story rolling about warnings against Indian culture. Like the Buffalo education. Have you ever eaten Buffalo Burger? Very god. Well done Barb.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014

Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review. Yes, I have they are very good.

Comment from c_lucas

Exceptional

Hate groups are everywhere, This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Error
from 40,000 to 10,000 years (10,000 to 40,000 years)

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014

Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.

reply by c_lucas on 28-Sep-2014

You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

predawn lit Eastern sky - eastern
Wild animal tracks or no loud noises - No wild animal tracks or loud noises
fascinating explanation of buffalo/bison and the history involving them
You create an atmosphere of intrigue and danger well
good foreboding cliffhanger in your closing
Brooke

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 Comment Written 28-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014

Thank you. Corrections were made, and I appreciate the help.