Comment from maggieadams

Excellent

Alliteration on parade, just in time for the Halloween month. I could picture a kindergarten or first grade teacher reading this to his/her students....the kids would love the sound of the poem and the sound words as well. Great rhyme and rhythm, too.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

Thank you so much, Maggie :-) Brooke

Comment from trimple

Excellent

Blimey Brooke! LOL

When I saw the picture, I presumed this to be about some wretched disease of the intestinal tract..

Funny thing when I was reading your ghoulish tale, the white of the lettering I am sure was coming out from the page LOL

A great Halloween scary/fun feel.

Kind regards

trimple

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

LOL - I will have to have a go at an intestinal tract poem some other time ;-) Thanks so much, Tracey :-) Brooke

reply by trimple on 30-Sep-2014

I have no doubt you could!
In fact, I dare you to write about the intestinal tract and make it sound beautiful!

:)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Wow, you are eager for Halloween to happen! Of course, I relished the abundant alliteration and rhymed couplets. But most of all, I enjoyed being swept away by the ghoulish mood you created. BOO! -Joan

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

Miranda was out buying yet more Halloween decorations to go with the slew of them she bought last year and the year before... LOL
Got me in the mood :-) Thanks so much, Joan. Brooke

reply by Joan E. on 01-Oct-2014

Ah, ha--well she's a good influence! Enjoy- Joan

Comment from JaclynNightbreeze

Excellent

This is an excellent poem with great rhyme, I also love the fact that its about Halloween, and its a perfect poem since October is coming up! Great Job!

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

Jaclyn, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Dear Brooke, even when you write something
scary is beautiful. I specially like this ...
Ghoulies grumble, goblin growl,
do it loud but do it now--
Soon you wont be heard or seen
till you reign next Halloween.

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

Bryana, thank you so very much :-) Brooke

Comment from DSMalott

Excellent

Well stated!
The rhyme scheme was wonderfully structured and was delightful to read. The Halloween theme was playfully and cleverly portrayed.
Nicely done.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

DS, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Okay, this is another side I haven't seen. You can go creepy, but with a light heartedness in the lines. Great work, and perfect for the season.

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

lancellot, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from bard owl

Excellent

I love Halloween and all the images it brings to mind. Your ghouls and ghosts and goblins and monsters put me in the mood for Halloween fun. The imagery in this poem is very clear lending a creepy atmosphere. And I do like the last two lines! Beware of what is to come when Halloween comes again! The use of alliteration made this fun to read aloud. Excellent, Brooke. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

Linda, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

What a fun Halloween poem to read Brooke. Wonderful rhyming couplets and great alliteration with Ghoulies grumble, ghosties groan.

Loved it.
Janet

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

Janet, thank you so much :-) Brooke

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

I only inspire to be this talented, great work of art in the amazing piece. I grow daily as I read others works, but yours by far fascinate me. God Bless!

 Comment Written 29-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2014

Neonewman, thank you so much :-) Brooke