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Viewing comments for Chapter 60 "Evanesce."Mostly romance.
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Comment from rivki1111
Hi PiliPubul, my name is rivki and i have just read your poem entitled - Evanesce. This is a truly beautiful poem that spoke to me of someone wanting to live their live with ego integrity. Moving towards a complete oneness with self. A life well lived. Your vocabulary in here is great. Words are used to maximum effect in all of the work i have seen of yours. I think it is very nicely published with cooler and style. Well done, cheers, rivki.
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Hi PiliPubul, my name is rivki and i have just read your poem entitled - Evanesce. This is a truly beautiful poem that spoke to me of someone wanting to live their live with ego integrity. Moving towards a complete oneness with self. A life well lived. Your vocabulary in here is great. Words are used to maximum effect in all of the work i have seen of yours. I think it is very nicely published with cooler and style. Well done, cheers, rivki.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2005
Comment from tamsteambash
great poem the flow is excellent the best stanza is
I crave
emptiness
with clarity,
freedom
within my heart,
detachment
from old shadows
of what once was
precious,
but it is no more.
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great poem the flow is excellent the best stanza is
I crave
emptiness
with clarity,
freedom
within my heart,
detachment
from old shadows
of what once was
precious,
but it is no more.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2005
Comment from Writermom
Pili this is great - This one flows like a stream in the spring...
sorry for the Tony the Tiger review - It's great - but I have nothing else to say
wonderful stuff,
Dawn :o)
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Pili this is great - This one flows like a stream in the spring...
sorry for the Tony the Tiger review - It's great - but I have nothing else to say
wonderful stuff,
Dawn :o)
Comment Written 10-Sep-2005
Comment from clhutchinson
Letting go of the past and moving forward embrssing the present and reach for the dreams of the future. These thoughts are beautifully expressed with a clear fluent flow.Beautiful.
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Letting go of the past and moving forward embrssing the present and reach for the dreams of the future. These thoughts are beautifully expressed with a clear fluent flow.Beautiful.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2005
Comment from sengwriter
Fading memories of golden yearns can make you think, can make you realize so painfully that one poem of this statute proves that by its worth. I feel an inherrent strong sense of self-assesment here and you make yourself prepare to face the reality and desire for a newness free from the old doubtful attachment which still stires your vision and imaginations but with pain and blockness.
I welcome your freeness and fondness for new emptyness of mind to accept something new that the life has to offer you again.
"detachment
from old shadows
of what once was
precious,
but it is no more. " How painfully you've lined these words, I can feel and hope this frustration will be over with the new wind of time.
Gautam
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Fading memories of golden yearns can make you think, can make you realize so painfully that one poem of this statute proves that by its worth. I feel an inherrent strong sense of self-assesment here and you make yourself prepare to face the reality and desire for a newness free from the old doubtful attachment which still stires your vision and imaginations but with pain and blockness.
I welcome your freeness and fondness for new emptyness of mind to accept something new that the life has to offer you again.
"detachment
from old shadows
of what once was
precious,
but it is no more. " How painfully you've lined these words, I can feel and hope this frustration will be over with the new wind of time.
Gautam
Comment Written 09-Sep-2005
Comment from Lainee
Pili this is another beautiful piece of poetry that may be fantasy but rings so true within each stanza. The flow is great as are your thoughts and descriptions my friend!
Goodluck always,
Lainee :O)
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Pili this is another beautiful piece of poetry that may be fantasy but rings so true within each stanza. The flow is great as are your thoughts and descriptions my friend!
Goodluck always,
Lainee :O)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2005
Comment from Michael Firewalker
There is deep wisdom here----the poet is passing into higher realms of being, because she has seen what is eternal and what is not, and she is moving onward accordingly----how I do admire her, with her lucid visions of beautiful days, lived in pure and bountiful realities, and calmly rarifying atmospheres of truth, and love, and peace.
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There is deep wisdom here----the poet is passing into higher realms of being, because she has seen what is eternal and what is not, and she is moving onward accordingly----how I do admire her, with her lucid visions of beautiful days, lived in pure and bountiful realities, and calmly rarifying atmospheres of truth, and love, and peace.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2005
Comment from smiles_with_sunshine
>>>P>i>l>i>>P>u>b>u>l>>>
What a fantastic poem, Pili! So much emotion emanates from each declarative verse..so much determination to truly be free to just "be".
I want this too. Let me know if you find the key..or I guess it may be
different for each person...but would still like to know when and how you arrive there. Seems a lot of poems are touching on so many of the same issues I'm dealing with in my life. I try to glean the pearls of wisdom found in each one, just as I have from your poem. Thank you for showing us your heart through your poetry. Take care, Pili, and "BE" Blessed.
:)s* smiles
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>>>P>i>l>i>>P>u>b>u>l>>>
What a fantastic poem, Pili! So much emotion emanates from each declarative verse..so much determination to truly be free to just "be".
I want this too. Let me know if you find the key..or I guess it may be
different for each person...but would still like to know when and how you arrive there. Seems a lot of poems are touching on so many of the same issues I'm dealing with in my life. I try to glean the pearls of wisdom found in each one, just as I have from your poem. Thank you for showing us your heart through your poetry. Take care, Pili, and "BE" Blessed.
:)s* smiles
Comment Written 09-Sep-2005
Comment from AuroraSky
That picture almost reminds me of something I'd expect to see in the movie Beetlejuice!
Old footprints fading...so new ones can step forth into the bright future and live fully--free and basking in eternal sunshine...cool poem Pili
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That picture almost reminds me of something I'd expect to see in the movie Beetlejuice!
Old footprints fading...so new ones can step forth into the bright future and live fully--free and basking in eternal sunshine...cool poem Pili
Comment Written 09-Sep-2005
Comment from Lisloh
DEEP BREATH ~ SIGH ~ TEARS
This is superb.
I hear the cry of a Soul that desires freedom with integrity.
You have the integrity, now claim the freedom.
I crave
emptiness
with clarity,
freedom
within my heart,
detachment
from old shadows
of what once was
precious,
but it is no more
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
No nits. Awesome write.
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DEEP BREATH ~ SIGH ~ TEARS
This is superb.
I hear the cry of a Soul that desires freedom with integrity.
You have the integrity, now claim the freedom.
I crave
emptiness
with clarity,
freedom
within my heart,
detachment
from old shadows
of what once was
precious,
but it is no more
Thank you for creating this and sharing.
Take care & be safe
Lisloh
No nits. Awesome write.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2005
