Eyes Left To Try
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Comment from honeytree
The art work is very interesting for the words written.
We all grow and exist in a world
that can be cruel, hurtful and indifferent
towards one another.
None of us are perfect here on earth,
we make many mistakes.
honey tree
(All is fading in pure blue.)
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The art work is very interesting for the words written.
We all grow and exist in a world
that can be cruel, hurtful and indifferent
towards one another.
None of us are perfect here on earth,
we make many mistakes.
honey tree
(All is fading in pure blue.)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2014
Comment from MiaNalaide
I am not sure what is going on in this poem. I have read it four times, but there is something about it that makes me interested. So if you could break it down for me, I would like to know what this is about.
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I am not sure what is going on in this poem. I have read it four times, but there is something about it that makes me interested. So if you could break it down for me, I would like to know what this is about.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
Comment from RamSlade
Eh . . . Loved this line especially . . . "Caught into the wise." The poem is one of those ones where you have to figure out it plot (or its where-with-all) and success thereof. I like this kind of writing, and in this one I sense it is all about the lady collects her due." Hah! Since I'm an old dude I liked that last line you employed also.
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Eh . . . Loved this line especially . . . "Caught into the wise." The poem is one of those ones where you have to figure out it plot (or its where-with-all) and success thereof. I like this kind of writing, and in this one I sense it is all about the lady collects her due." Hah! Since I'm an old dude I liked that last line you employed also.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2014
